oh my I like your style of poetry! Dark and sorta sad! good job! it was very sad but good keep it up!^^
anything's better then this.
I wish I didn't exist.
If you said you loved me,
then I guess it was a lie.
Since you said this isn't working,
I guess I'll go and die.
scary.....very made me want to go hide..*shivers*uhhh....good description as well!??*runs away*