Guess which anime this was inspired by

Wolf_of_the_North · Jan 07, 2007, 12:01 PM

Okay, so a while ago I wrote a poem based on a manga and anime I really like. Can you guess which one?

They say my power lies in my star
But that cannot be
How can my power be up so far
Not allowing it to be seen by me?

They say to remember my invincible spell
That it lies deep within
But how am I able to tell
When my feelings are fighting to win?

They say I am loved by everyone
My smiling face brightens the way
But, what about the places where evil's never done
The places where night conquers day?

I guess I must reach up high,
And search inside of me,
Take a leap of faith and fly
To fulfill my destiny

*divine_punishment* · Jan 07, 2007, 12:26 PM

Is it Tenshi Muyo? It sounds vaguely like a Tenshi Muyo one . . . Awesome job, by the way. My favourite part is:
"But, what about the places where evil's never done
The places where night conquers day?"

*Kasai* · Jan 08, 2007, 02:54 AM

Proper punctuation would make the poem flow better.

DEMON SPAWN · Jan 08, 2007, 03:51 PM

awsome poem wolf

but I dont know what anime inspired it

*Familyguyfan2* · Jan 08, 2007, 06:32 PM

I have no idea,but I like the poem. It's good.

*ketaro* · Jan 08, 2007, 08:11 PM

Nice peom but as kasai said punctuation is needed to flow better.

Wolf_of_the_North · Jan 10, 2007, 05:59 PM

It was inspired by Cardcaptor Sakura...can you see it now? Or was I totally off?

*divine_punishment* · Jan 16, 2007, 07:31 AM

NOW I GET IT!!!!!!!! I wasn't sure if it was actually a star, or a metaphor! OMG, as they say!!!!! It's all so clear to me now!

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Wolf_of_the_North Diamond in the Rough Join Date: Aug 2006 Location: Just a hopscotch away from Never Never Land... Posts: 112 Thanks: 0 Thanked 2 Times in 2 Posts Credits: 1,007	Guess which anime this was inspired by Okay, so a while ago I wrote a poem based on a manga and anime I really like. Can you guess which one? They say my power lies in my star But that cannot be How can my power be up so far Not allowing it to be seen by me? They say to remember my invincible spell That it lies deep within But how am I able to tell When my feelings are fighting to win? They say I am loved by everyone My smiling face brightens the way But, what about the places where evil's never done The places where night conquers day? I guess I must reach up high, And search inside of me, Take a leap of faith and fly To fulfill my destiny __________________ DEMON SPAWN IS AWESOME!!!!! XP
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divine_punishment Shining Star Join Date: Apr 2006 Location: Good question . . . where am I? Posts: 1,271 Thanks: 22 Thanked 27 Times in 22 Posts Credits: 59,274	Re: Guess which anime this was inspired by Is it Tenshi Muyo? It sounds vaguely like a Tenshi Muyo one . . . Awesome job, by the way. My favourite part is: "But, what about the places where evil's never done The places where night conquers day?" __________________ Bite Me!
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Kasai Domme Join Date: Nov 2004 Location: Florida Posts: 2,745 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Credits: 1,490	Re: Guess which anime this was inspired by Proper punctuation would make the poem flow better. __________________ Seduced by Flesh
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DEMON SPAWN Diamond in the Rough Join Date: Jan 2006 Location: all over the world Posts: 330 Thanks: 6 Thanked 1 Time in 1 Post Credits: 2,230	Re: Guess which anime this was inspired by awsome poem wolf but I dont know what anime inspired it __________________
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Familyguyfan2 anime fan Join Date: Dec 2006 Location: Malvern,AR Posts: 1,019 Thanks: 12 Thanked 4 Times in 4 Posts Credits: 4,318	Re: Guess which anime this was inspired by I have no idea,but I like the poem. It's good.
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ketaro Its Over 9000! Join Date: Apr 2005 Posts: 4,226 Thanks: 27 Thanked 31 Times in 29 Posts Credits: 23,390	Re: Guess which anime this was inspired by Nice peom but as kasai said punctuation is needed to flow better.
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Wolf_of_the_North Diamond in the Rough Join Date: Aug 2006 Location: Just a hopscotch away from Never Never Land... Posts: 112 Thanks: 0 Thanked 2 Times in 2 Posts Credits: 1,007	Re: Guess which anime this was inspired by It was inspired by Cardcaptor Sakura...can you see it now? Or was I totally off? __________________ DEMON SPAWN IS AWESOME!!!!! XP
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divine_punishment Shining Star Join Date: Apr 2006 Location: Good question . . . where am I? Posts: 1,271 Thanks: 22 Thanked 27 Times in 22 Posts Credits: 59,274	Re: Guess which anime this was inspired by NOW I GET IT!!!!!!!! I wasn't sure if it was actually a star, or a metaphor! OMG, as they say!!!!! It's all so clear to me now! __________________ Bite Me!
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