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Old Jan 07, 2007, 12:01 PM   #1 (permalink)
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Guess which anime this was inspired by

Okay, so a while ago I wrote a poem based on a manga and anime I really like. Can you guess which one?


They say my power lies in my star
But that cannot be
How can my power be up so far
Not allowing it to be seen by me?

They say to remember my invincible spell
That it lies deep within
But how am I able to tell
When my feelings are fighting to win?

They say I am loved by everyone
My smiling face brightens the way
But, what about the places where evil's never done
The places where night conquers day?

I guess I must reach up high,
And search inside of me,
Take a leap of faith and fly
To fulfill my destiny
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Old Jan 07, 2007, 12:26 PM   #2 (permalink)
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Re: Guess which anime this was inspired by

Is it Tenshi Muyo? It sounds vaguely like a Tenshi Muyo one . . . Awesome job, by the way. My favourite part is:
"But, what about the places where evil's never done
The places where night conquers day?"
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Old Jan 08, 2007, 02:54 AM   #3 (permalink)
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Re: Guess which anime this was inspired by

Proper punctuation would make the poem flow better.
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Old Jan 08, 2007, 03:51 PM   #4 (permalink)
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Re: Guess which anime this was inspired by

awsome poem wolf but I dont know what anime inspired it
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Old Jan 08, 2007, 06:32 PM   #5 (permalink)
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I have no idea,but I like the poem. It's good.
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Re: Guess which anime this was inspired by

Nice peom but as kasai said punctuation is needed to flow better.
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Old Jan 10, 2007, 05:59 PM   #7 (permalink)
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Re: Guess which anime this was inspired by

It was inspired by Cardcaptor Sakura...can you see it now? Or was I totally off?
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NOW I GET IT!!!!!!!! I wasn't sure if it was actually a star, or a metaphor! OMG, as they say!!!!! It's all so clear to me now!
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