Guess the title.. it is at the end...

*RayMe* · Apr 08, 2007, 10:39 AM

Steady as she goes slowly.
Her path are decorated,
thousands of diamonds,
They all fill up around her.
Floating high up,
far away from man's grasp,
But not anymore.

The white globe,
who always change it's shape.
Oh how beautiful you are,
though you are filled with the scars of time,
yet still u shone brightly.

Shines back the sun's grace,
Just like a mirror could.
You are famous in poems,
for you are the symbol of peace,
enchantment, purity, innocence,
secrets, balance and most of all beauty...

The title is moon.. i put the title at the last so u could guess b4 reading the title

*koga23* · Apr 08, 2007, 07:40 PM

Well well nice poem Ray how did u come up with that one ? up late again are we XD.

elie26 · Apr 09, 2007, 12:47 AM

O.o I guess "moon" suits the time when you posted this XD
I love how u described it-

Quote:

for you are the symbol of peace,
enchantment, purity, innocence,
secrets, balance and most of all beauty...

The moon does seem like that ^_^ With it's many secrets and faces. Nice job.

*Rave_Grip* · Apr 09, 2007, 02:16 AM

But isn't moon supposed to be "he" instead of a "she"?
Anyways, nice work, Mr. Poet. Very descriptive

xxoxx · Apr 09, 2007, 06:58 AM

May you have the hindsight to know where you’ve been,
The foresight to know where you are going,
And the insight to know when you have gone too far...if you know i like the moon and i hope go to the moon...but your poem nice and ilove it ....

Tbaism · Apr 09, 2007, 09:20 AM

That's not a poem! It doesn't make any sense or even rymes for that matter!

Nah playing

I really liked your description. Caught me completely off guard with the title.
I enjoyed it immensley. Keep up the work.

*RayMe* · Apr 09, 2007, 09:23 AM

ooh u scared me man T.T i though i made a bad poem T.T
thx elie ^^
yeah up late again man xD
thx ravey ^^ i like giving decription over something..

how did i come up with that? hmm easy.. it's over some1's err what do we call that...
well she asked me if i could made more poems on moon and stars and stuff..so i made one over the moon

glad u all like it

Tbaism · Apr 09, 2007, 09:36 AM

LoL. Don't worry about making bad poems there. I tip my hat considering the ambition behind the creation. Moons and the stars "Sigh" Reminds me of the good old days of romance and suspense.

P.s. - Even if I didn't like it, I wouldn't tell you my thoughts just like that and right in your face. I would prob just applaud your creativity and say something flattering like "I was caught off-guard" or "I really enjoyed it" . You know, stuff like that.

<.< o.o >.>

*RayMe* · Apr 09, 2007, 09:48 AM

Now.. thats scary of hearing tht. xD naw.. don't worry.. just be sincere an tell me if it's bad.. ^^

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RayMe 1 )3^^( )N Join Date: Jul 2006 Location: Somewhere i would love to leave right now for somewhere better... Posts: 3,601 Thanks: 54 Thanked 26 Times in 23 Posts Credits: 59,118	Re: Guess the title.. it is at the end... ooh u scared me man T.T i though i made a bad poem T.T thx elie ^^ yeah up late again man xD thx ravey ^^ i like giving decription over something.. how did i come up with that? hmm easy.. it's over some1's err what do we call that... well she asked me if i could made more poems on moon and stars and stuff..so i made one over the moon glad u all like it __________________ Legion Ketsueki Lives on~!! The best ever Lasura~! >>>myspace<<<
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Tbaism Upcoming Legend Join Date: Jul 2006 Posts: 642 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Credits: 2,816	Re: Guess the title.. it is at the end... LoL. Don't worry about making bad poems there. I tip my hat considering the ambition behind the creation. Moons and the stars "Sigh" Reminds me of the good old days of romance and suspense. P.s. - Even if I didn't like it, I wouldn't tell you my thoughts just like that and right in your face. I would prob just applaud your creativity and say something flattering like "I was caught off-guard" or "I really enjoyed it" . You know, stuff like that. <.< o.o >.>
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