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    Guess the title.. it is at the end...

    Steady as she goes slowly.
    Her path are decorated,
    thousands of diamonds,
    They all fill up around her.
    Floating high up,
    far away from man's grasp,
    But not anymore.

    The white globe,
    who always change it's shape.
    Oh how beautiful you are,
    though you are filled with the scars of time,
    yet still u shone brightly.

    Shines back the sun's grace,
    Just like a mirror could.
    You are famous in poems,
    for you are the symbol of peace,
    enchantment, purity, innocence,
    secrets, balance and most of all beauty...

    The title is moon.. i put the title at the last so u could guess b4 reading the title

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    Re: Guess the title.. it is at the end...

    Well well nice poem Ray how did u come up with that one ? up late again are we XD.
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    Re: Guess the title.. it is at the end...

    O.o I guess "moon" suits the time when you posted this XD
    I love how u described it-
    for you are the symbol of peace,
    enchantment, purity, innocence,
    secrets, balance and most of all beauty...
    The moon does seem like that ^_^ With it's many secrets and faces. Nice job.

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    Re: Guess the title.. it is at the end...

    But isn't moon supposed to be "he" instead of a "she"?
    Anyways, nice work, Mr. Poet. Very descriptive

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    Re: Guess the title.. it is at the end...

    May you have the hindsight to know where you’ve been,
    The foresight to know where you are going,
    And the insight to know when you have gone too far.
    ..if you know i like the moon and i hope go to the moon...but your poem nice and ilove it ....

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    Re: Guess the title.. it is at the end...

    That's not a poem! It doesn't make any sense or even rymes for that matter!

    Nah playing

    I really liked your description. Caught me completely off guard with the title.
    I enjoyed it immensley. Keep up the work.

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    Re: Guess the title.. it is at the end...

    ooh u scared me man T.T i though i made a bad poem T.T
    thx elie ^^
    yeah up late again man xD
    thx ravey ^^ i like giving decription over something..

    how did i come up with that? hmm easy.. it's over some1's err what do we call that...
    well she asked me if i could made more poems on moon and stars and stuff..so i made one over the moon

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    Re: Guess the title.. it is at the end...

    LoL. Don't worry about making bad poems there. I tip my hat considering the ambition behind the creation. Moons and the stars "Sigh" Reminds me of the good old days of romance and suspense.

    P.s. - Even if I didn't like it, I wouldn't tell you my thoughts just like that and right in your face. I would prob just applaud your creativity and say something flattering like "I was caught off-guard" or "I really enjoyed it" . You know, stuff like that.


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