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    The Guitar Plays on!

    He plays a song , so full of
    emotion , hate, love , frustration
    doesnt matter what it is he plays
    it note by note as the hours
    pass unnoticed.

    The strings on his 6 string
    plays in a way that only
    he knows when it will end
    and even he doesnt know
    when that will be.

    Let the guitar play on let
    its strings play on , as people
    listen trying to understand what
    it is that makes the notes so beautiful.

    The sun goes down as he keeps
    playing , does he notice how things
    seem to just go by with out slowing? ,
    or does he play for the moment because
    that's what matters most when he plays?

    As he slows his hand on the strings
    he comes back to reality with a sigh
    wishing that a song could make the
    moment last forever.
    .................................................. ...
    this song is about how a song no matter
    what it is be it acoustical or a power rift
    it what makes you who you are , and it is
    also what makes things simple well for most
    anyway because they can just play for the
    moment till the moment is gone.
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and all your demons
    I'll be the one to protect you from a will to survive and a voice of reason
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and your choices son
    They're one in the same, I must isolate you...
    Isolate and save you from yourself

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    Re: The Guitar Plays on!

    Ahh... a nice poem this is... I enjoyed reading about this guy who plays his life away, I loved the last stranza, somehow it reminded me of myslef...
    Only about how I feel when I'm about to finnish a story... I feel happy and also sad, because I wish for that moment to stay there forever... but then I put the final point and I have to move on to another story (and to start a new one is really hard)
    See, how much this poem made me think about? ^^ great work Chris!

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    Re: The Guitar Plays on!

    Simply beautiful. I love the guitar--I own one, myself. Such an amazing instrument. And (I agree with you) guitars and music define who people are; for it's a form of art. Good job, I give you mad props on this one. ^_^


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    Re: The Guitar Plays on!

    I love your poems this one is amazing lol u must have a guitar i guess but hey u never know, anyway i just want to say lots of luck with your next poem

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    Re: The Guitar Plays on!

    thansk im glad everyone liked this one and i have tried
    playing guitar but its harder than it looks lol but i sort of
    like the idea of just relaxing playing whats on your mind not
    caring where the music leads you.
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and all your demons
    I'll be the one to protect you from a will to survive and a voice of reason
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and your choices son
    They're one in the same, I must isolate you...
    Isolate and save you from yourself

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    Re: The Guitar Plays on!

    Very good poem that reminds you that all kinds of music can touch you and make you think in so many ways. Good work and I can't wait to read the next one.
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