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  1. Nov 24, 2007 02:29 PM #1
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    Haiku: Demise

    Singing so sadly
    Demise she suffers alone
    For death she awaits

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    Re: Haiku: Demise

    OOh, this haiku sounds so sad. That poor girl being all alone...I feel bad for her...
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    Re: Haiku: Demise

    I LOVE HAIKU!! ^_^

    This one is very sad, yet powerful in such a short piece of work (well, haiku are supposed to be short, LOL). I love the words you chose for this haiku. Good job! ^_^

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