Watch the fireflies
Burning with a lovely light
Drifting through the night
I just thought of this haiku and thought it would be nice to share with AO.
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Watch the fireflies
Burning with a lovely light
Drifting through the night
I just thought of this haiku and thought it would be nice to share with AO.
It's really nice!!! I love it... beautiful... I like haiku! I like the fact that they try to draw your attention to simple moments and try to see something beautiful, meaningful in these moments, these words... :)
When I had wrote it I was thinking about how fireflies only light up to atract their love....I thought that if I could light up like that, then I wouldn't be so lonely anymore. Thank you for liking my haiku!:D:
Yes, you can feel this thought in it... that the light you shine, the light you have in your heart will help you get through the darknes... Very nice... :angel:Quote:
Originally Posted by Waremono