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    Haiku: Fireflies

    Watch the fireflies
    Burning with a lovely light
    Drifting through the night

    I just thought of this haiku and thought it would be nice to share with AO.
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    Re: Haiku: Fireflies

    It's really nice!!! I love it... beautiful... I like haiku! I like the fact that they try to draw your attention to simple moments and try to see something beautiful, meaningful in these moments, these words...

    My recommended fanfic: "Dreamer" by Scourge

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    Re: Haiku: Fireflies

    When I had wrote it I was thinking about how fireflies only light up to atract their love....I thought that if I could light up like that, then I wouldn't be so lonely anymore. Thank you for liking my haiku!
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    Re: Haiku: Fireflies

    Quote Originally Posted by Waremono View Post
    When I had wrote it I was thinking about how fireflies only light up to atract their love....I thought that if I could light up like that, then I wouldn't be so lonely anymore. Thank you for liking my haiku!
    Yes, you can feel this thought in it... that the light you shine, the light you have in your heart will help you get through the darknes... Very nice...

    My recommended fanfic: "Dreamer" by Scourge

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