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  1. Nov 24, 2007 02:41 PM #1
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    Haiku: Tsubasa

    Wings of flight soaring
    Through the sky leading away
    Nowhere I desire
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    Re: Haiku: Tsubasa

    O.O So much emotion! It seems to reflect you, like really! The haiku draws your feelings out, doesn't it?
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    Re: Haiku: Tsubasa

    I agree with ChiniseDragonKeeper. It seems your emotion is carried through your haiku. That is a very good thing! Keep it up! I love to read haiku more than I do writing it, I hope to see more of your work. This is very good. Almost like you wanna soar free, but you have no destination in life. Very perplexing indeed. Kudos!

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