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    Halloween

    Halloween will come...
    And Halloween will go...
    But one thing about Halloween is true...
    That shall never fade away...
    That's the TRUE CREATURES of the night...
    No matter if their Vampires, Werewolves, Zombies, Gohst, or one of the many others...
    Whatever one you or the next person may be...
    If you/they stay...
    Halloween shall always stay and rule too.

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    Re: Halloween

    nicely done it is great keep it up honey and write more
    i cry inside for life anew i die each time im torn in two i live for earth and die for none along comes a god who will always bring peace and tranquility

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    Re: Halloween

    Awsome! Great job..the poem gives Hallwoeen that mystrey feeling..

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    Re: Halloween

    Quote Originally Posted by SweetCandi View Post
    Awsome! Great job..the poem gives Hallwoeen that mystrey feeling..

    Agree with you SweetCandi ..

    Nice Flow and how you wrap the whole thoughts at the End...It make the Halloween more active and we can Haha imagine how the Halloween will be...plus easy words you use to describe which make your idea is too clear to the reader ..

    Great poem..

    Foolish beating

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