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    Halls of the Blind

    I can see what you see not

    Vision milky then eyes rot

    When you turn they will be gone

    Whispering their hidden song

    Then you see what cannot be

    Shadows move where light should be

    Out of darkness out of mind

    Cast down into the halls of the blind

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    I like how the poem seems so dark, it also flowed well and was easy to read..

    The first two lines appealed to me most;

    I can see what you see not

    Vision milky then eyes rot


    The way you described the vison being milky just stood out more.

    TY Sasurai for the lovely sig!*

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    thank you. i thought that up awhile ago.

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