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Since this is my first poem, please go easy on me!
I let you see my childish fears
The streaming of my non-stop tears
Please listen to my silent plea;
I still need you so despratly.
How could you just throw me away?
There are things I still need to say;
Your open secret made me tense
Should be made a hanging offense.
Your road is always bending,
Not like my happy ending
Why won't you let me stay?
'Cuz i'm not gonna go away.
It's pretty good :) 9/10 ...
It's beautiful . . . yet sad at the same time. Could sound like a personal experience
That was really nice I hope you to post more poems
nice poem here. Sorri, not really good at giving constructive comments. Anyway keep it up.
Please write me some poems so I can pose as a good poet, haha
haha, don't see many 'rhyming poems' on AO so I like it. lol. A little harsh though... but thats life, what r u gonna do? lol.
Being your very first poem, you did a great job, Kerry. Short and simple, just the way I like. You should continue to write more poetry, and take time to share with us. I bet, if you continue writing like this, one day, you will become very proficient in writing poetry. Anyway! Keep up the great work, and keep 'em coming. ^_^