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Since this is my first poem, please go easy on me!
I let you see my childish fears
The streaming of my non-stop tears
Please listen to my silent plea;
I still need you so despratly.
How could you just throw me away?
There are things I still need to say;
Your open secret made me tense
Should be made a hanging offense.
Your road is always bending,
Not like my happy ending
Why won't you let me stay?
'Cuz i'm not gonna go away.
TY Sasurai for the lovely sig!*
It's pretty good
It's beautiful . . . yet sad at the same time. Could sound like a personal experience
http://img137.imageshack.us/img137/1...icsclanhf5.gif[x/img]
Thanks alot Sasurihell and Kedar for the sigs and thanks Sammy 65 for the changing pics
(just remove the "x" from the [x/img] tag!
That was really nice I hope you to post more poems
I live in the shadows and I am as fast as the speed of light, but I use my ability's to help people even though they fear me for who I am.
A Brand new Theme song for all my friends who use to come to Ao and the People that still come's to Ao.
http://video.freevideoblog.com/hotte...7631ca1c2a.htm
nice poem here. Sorri, not really good at giving constructive comments. Anyway keep it up.
Thanks for the siggy Ky-lyrra
Please write me some poems so I can pose as a good poet, haha
o~Piggy-san~o
haha, don't see many 'rhyming poems' on AO so I like it. lol. A little harsh though... but thats life, what r u gonna do? lol.
Sig courtesy goes to : Sazuka. [Sig team]
Being your very first poem, you did a great job, Kerry. Short and simple, just the way I like. You should continue to write more poetry, and take time to share with us. I bet, if you continue writing like this, one day, you will become very proficient in writing poetry. Anyway! Keep up the great work, and keep 'em coming. ^_^
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