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    Hangman

    i'm just a guy that never tried
    i'm just a stupid **** with brilliant luck
    and sometimes a bright idea
    so shower me in a chorus of compliments
    and verse I don't deserve
    I might run but I'll never hide

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    Re: Hangman

    I really like the idea for ths poem. However, I didnt understand a thing while reading it. Perhaps punctuation would make the poem a little more understandable? And also give it a flow.
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