Hangman

Shu · Dec 18, 2006, 10:34 PM

i'm just a guy that never tried
i'm just a stupid **** with brilliant luck
and sometimes a bright idea
so shower me in a chorus of compliments
and verse I don't deserve
I might run but I'll never hide

*Kasai* · Dec 19, 2006, 02:10 AM

I really like the idea for ths poem. However, I didnt understand a thing while reading it. Perhaps punctuation would make the poem a little more understandable? And also give it a flow.

Dec 18, 2006, 10:34 PM	#1 (permalink)
Shu Upcoming Legend Join Date: Mar 2006 Posts: 563 Thanks: 0 Thanked 1 Time in 1 Post Credits: 749	Hangman i'm just a guy that never tried i'm just a stupid **** with brilliant luck and sometimes a bright idea so shower me in a chorus of compliments and verse I don't deserve I might run but I'll never hide
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Dec 19, 2006, 02:10 AM	#2 (permalink)
Kasai Domme Join Date: Nov 2004 Location: Florida Posts: 2,745 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Credits: 1,490	Re: Hangman I really like the idea for ths poem. However, I didnt understand a thing while reading it. Perhaps punctuation would make the poem a little more understandable? And also give it a flow. __________________ Seduced by Flesh
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