Have I found it again?
I am not sure,
I feel verry happy so
I may have, and with happyness,
isnt there also sadness?
Either way all I care about right
Now is staying happy.
I think I found her, I hope I did.
If I did I am glad. All I know
Is I am happy.
I hope it lasts, I hope it stays.
I wish it is real, I hope we are
True, We stay close by email,
Even in distance we are close.
All I know is I am happy.
Hey guys this is a random poem sorry if it is not good but I felt like posting again. Please tell me what you think.
well..maybe its not an excellent poem but realy it touched me.
Good poem and I hope that you really found happiness this time. You sound like you did in that poem. Great job keep it up.
thank you guys. and I knew since it was a quick one that it would not be that great. lol thanks for your imput guys.
I like it. hehehe
yay you ofund happieness aGIN. HEHEHEHe
But yes this is a good poem could have been better. but it is good.
Keep it up and hope to see more ^.^
not the best ones but it's not bad either...(do i sound right?) Ya...you do sound happy so i guess well done! haha hehe :laugh:
hope to see more from you and keep it up.
i agree with zainab there.. ^^ hmm...i suggest for a bit methaphores.. :) and description and not just telling it generally how u feel ^^