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    Happiness.

    Have I found it again?
    I am not sure,
    I feel verry happy so
    I may have, and with happyness,
    isnt there also sadness?

    Either way all I care about right
    Now is staying happy.
    I think I found her, I hope I did.
    If I did I am glad. All I know
    Is I am happy.

    I hope it lasts, I hope it stays.
    I wish it is real, I hope we are
    True, We stay close by email,
    Even in distance we are close.
    All I know is I am happy.

    Hey guys this is a random poem sorry if it is not good but I felt like posting again. Please tell me what you think.
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    Keep what you hold dear close for one day they may be gone forever!
    Make one person smile for it will continue to spread but if you make a frown that will spread as well.http://www.animeonline.net/gallery/s...0/ppuser/57173

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    Re: Happiness.

    well..maybe its not an excellent poem but realy it touched me.

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    Re: Happiness.

    Good poem and I hope that you really found happiness this time. You sound like you did in that poem. Great job keep it up.

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    Re: Happiness.

    thank you guys. and I knew since it was a quick one that it would not be that great. lol thanks for your imput guys.
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    Re: Happiness.

    Hehehehee awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww
    I like it. hehehe
    yay you ofund happieness aGIN. HEHEHEHe
    But yes this is a good poem could have been better. but it is good.
    Keep it up and hope to see more
    ^.^

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    Re: Happiness.

    not the best ones but it's not bad either...(do i sound right?) Ya...you do sound happy so i guess well done! haha hehe

    hope to see more from you and keep it up.

    -zainab

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    Re: Happiness.

    i agree with zainab there.. ^^ hmm...i suggest for a bit methaphores.. and description and not just telling it generally how u feel ^^

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    Re: Happiness.

    Whoa!!!!!!!!!
    Awesome words!!!!!!!
    Loved it!!!!!!!!
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