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Sep 21, 2007, 04:16 PM
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 Dragonrider  Join Date: Feb 2007 Location: On the back of my dragon escaping everything and ignoring the pain.
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 Credits: 4,723 | Happiness. Have I found it again? I am not sure, I feel verry happy so I may have, and with happyness, isnt there also sadness? Either way all I care about right Now is staying happy. I think I found her, I hope I did. If I did I am glad. All I know Is I am happy. I hope it lasts, I hope it stays. I wish it is real, I hope we are True, We stay close by email, Even in distance we are close. All I know is I am happy. Hey guys this is a random poem sorry if it is not good but I felt like posting again. Please tell me what you think.
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Sep 21, 2007, 05:16 PM
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 ~always by your side~  Join Date: May 2007 Location: small little hick town
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Credits: 10,349 | Re: Happiness. Good poem and I hope that you really found happiness this time. You sound like you did in that poem. Great job keep it up. |
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Sep 21, 2007, 05:36 PM
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| Dragonrider Join Date: Feb 2007 Location: On the back of my dragon escaping everything and ignoring the pain.
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Credits: 4,723 | Re: Happiness. thank you guys. and I knew since it was a quick one that it would not be that great. lol thanks for your imput guys.
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Sep 21, 2007, 07:02 PM
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| NalaMidnight  Join Date: Feb 2006 Location: Virginia
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Credits: 14,170 | Re: Happiness. Hehehehee awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww I like it. hehehe yay you ofund happieness aGIN. HEHEHEHe But yes this is a good poem could have been better. but it is good. Keep it up and hope to see more ^.^
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Sep 22, 2007, 01:34 AM
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 Diamond in the Rough  Join Date: Sep 2007 Location: In a house. ._.
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Credits: 6,397 | Re: Happiness. not the best ones but it's not bad either...(do i sound right?) Ya...you do sound happy so i guess well done! haha hehe  hope to see more from you and keep it up. -zainab
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Sep 22, 2007, 03:04 AM
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Credits: 59,118 | Re: Happiness. i agree with zainab there.. ^^ hmm...i suggest for a bit methaphores..  and description and not just telling it generally how u feel ^^ |
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Sep 22, 2007, 11:39 AM
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| Chtonian Slayer  Join Date: Sep 2007 Location: you really do not want to know
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Credits: 31,396 | Re: Happiness. Whoa!!!!!!!!! Awesome words!!!!!!! Loved it!!!!!!!!
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Sep 24, 2007, 07:30 AM
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| Dragonrider Join Date: Feb 2007 Location: On the back of my dragon escaping everything and ignoring the pain.
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Credits: 4,723 | Re: Happiness. Thanks guys. I appreciate all the feed back I get. I will use it to make the next poem better. Thanks allot everyone.
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Sep 24, 2007, 09:08 AM
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| Diamond in the Rough  Join Date: May 2007 Location: I'm lost
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Credits: 3,404 | Re: Happiness. I really like your poem Ichigo! I hope you did find happiness this time. Keep up with the good work and can't wait to read more from you. |
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Sep 24, 2007, 09:20 AM
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| Dragonrider Join Date: Feb 2007 Location: On the back of my dragon escaping everything and ignoring the pain.
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Credits: 4,723 | Re: Happiness. thanks Ice I appreciate the feed back, and I hope I did too. I will post more when I think of some. thanks again
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