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    Thanks guys. I appreciate all the feed back I get. I will use it to make the next poem better. Thanks allot everyone.
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    Re: Happiness.

    I really like your poem Ichigo! I hope you did find happiness this time. Keep up with the good work and can't wait to read more from you.

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    thanks Ice I appreciate the feed back, and I hope I did too. I will post more when I think of some. thanks again
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    Re: Happiness.

    i though it every sweet .
    and it very touching
    .and happieness will stay
    great job

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    Thank you chrystalanna dn I hope it does. Thank you for your feedback.
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    Re: Happiness.

    This poem says some thing to me,that this guy is happy lol

    Nice poem you have there it flowed pretty good.Nice job
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    Thanks Koga I am glad you liked it. Iwill post more soon I promis.
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    Re: Happiness.

    it alright it feeling you have behind the word
    but it still good poem
    keep them coming
    Last edited by chrystalann2004; Oct 04, 2007 at 06:36 AM. Reason: spelling

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