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    happiness and pain

    i felt invincable with you by my side
    i felt nothing could hurt me
    i felt you there even when i was alone
    there with me helping me through the pain
    and when the pain was over
    i knew happiness would fill me again
    fill me till i felt invincable again

    then you go out again
    but i know im not alone
    your there with me always
    but this time you weren't
    you was with someone else
    someone, someone but not me

    then i feel it the pain again
    but this is different
    you made me feel this pain
    you were the one to hurt me break me
    so i had to pick up the pieces
    and put them back together

    then you come back again
    you make me feel more pain
    pain that my heart cant restrain
    pain that you'll feel someday

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    Re: happiness and pain

    Oh wow!!!! This seem so sad well to me but it was great so I hope to see more!
    「When I'm sad, I stop being sad and be awesome instead」

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    Re: happiness and pain

    great poem,spell check it next time... >_<.cant wait for the next one,your poems are improving.
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    Re: happiness and pain

    That one made me feel sad, but it was good keep up. you are getting the feelings out there,and I would like to see some more sometime. Thanks.

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    Re: happiness and pain

    Good work my friend just umm check the spelling but hey it was good i can't wait 2 go on dat rpg wait up for me but nice poem write sum more

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