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    Happiness we seek

    Happiness a curse we all seek,
    Filled with light and calm of mind,
    A word so obtainable.

    Happiness a two sided coin,
    Happiness and saddness hand and hand,
    One may be happy as long as one is sad.


    Saddness without happiness,
    Is not a life worth living,
    This curse we will all seek.

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    Re: Happiness we seek

    Dark as usual and once more to the point. Seems reminiscent of the sijo style.

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    Re: Happiness we seek

    sounds really good..
    i like the text.
    It's tha sad true.
    Surender or fall, it's no other way to turn.

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    Re: Happiness we seek

    Very nice, I like your style. Maybe a bit longer but nevertheless good.

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