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    "Happy beyond Happy"

    Happy beyond happy,
    Joyed beyond description.
    My heart raced with glee,
    for I saw you and am free.

    My sarrow taken,
    my hatred gone.
    Forgotten all that was wrong.
    Forgotten all I have done.
    Swollowing the happiness,
    drowning in my cheer.
    Thankyou for coming back.
    Thankyou for calming my fear.

    Happy beyond happy,
    Joyed beyond description.
    My eyes flood with tears,
    for I saw you and am free.


    I'm so happy now... I'm just so happy, I can't explain it. This poem (diffenitely not my best) comes no where near how happy I really feel. But I thought I'd let the world know. ^_^

    Let me know what you think, what I can do to improve it, or whatever. THX!!! (there's alway room for that)

    Come dance in the rain with me, no one is watching.

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    Re: "Happy beyond Happy"

    ..............wow this is really... uhh.. happy! hee hee cute.
    Thank you Lasura!
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    Re: "Happy beyond Happy"

    That was really was a happy poem. I've been that happy before and I still am. Good work and I look forward to reading your next one.
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