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    Hate.....

    Sadness and pain turns to hate
    Steals my soul and eats my faith
    Blood reins into my eyes
    Can't forgot to thinks that soon someone dies

    Sadness and pain turns to hate
    I see a devil in me from a glass plate
    That wants to hunt and kill the people
    Who made your life very miserable just like a rotten apple

    Sadness and pain turns to hate
    Get's some payback and list your death date
    Takes the inspiration from the people who suffered
    Didn't think twice to kill you and make sure you're dead

    Sadness and pain turns to hate
    Changes me and still hopes your safe
    Thinks I'm eaten by the dark, can't stops to see some blood
    Want to see you even if its the last, even from a cloud

    I need your attention,
    Point me to the right direction.....
    I've made mt decision,
    Point me to the right direction.....
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    Unhappy Re: Hate.....

    ahem.............

    hai............

    boring..............

    hmmmmmmmmmmm............
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    i hate my day

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    Re: Hate.....

    Its because its America's turn to chat and not Asians..... Yet, I only had a dew friends here.....

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    Re: Hate.....

    Very dark and I like the way you used the repetition of dark words.

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    Re: Hate.....

    Thank you..... I guess I'll make a war poem for a person here that wants some.....

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    Re: Hate.....

    Not me I'm done with wars Maybe about a survivour after a war?

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    Roger I'll make two poems then, one for you that is a survivor, and the other one for that person..... We should stop this `cause we'll be warned again.....

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    Re: Hate.....

    Okay, but mine was just an idea ^^;

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