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Old May 19, 2006, 04:58 AM   #1 (permalink)
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Hate.....

Sadness and pain turns to hate
Steals my soul and eats my faith
Blood reins into my eyes
Can't forgot to thinks that soon someone dies

Sadness and pain turns to hate
I see a devil in me from a glass plate
That wants to hunt and kill the people
Who made your life very miserable just like a rotten apple

Sadness and pain turns to hate
Get's some payback and list your death date
Takes the inspiration from the people who suffered
Didn't think twice to kill you and make sure you're dead

Sadness and pain turns to hate
Changes me and still hopes your safe
Thinks I'm eaten by the dark, can't stops to see some blood
Want to see you even if its the last, even from a cloud

I need your attention,
Point me to the right direction.....
I've made mt decision,
Point me to the right direction.....
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Old May 19, 2006, 05:08 AM   #2 (permalink)
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Unhappy Re: Hate.....

ahem.............

hai............

boring..............

hmmmmmmmmmmm............
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Old May 19, 2006, 05:18 AM   #3 (permalink)
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Re: Hate.....

Its because its America's turn to chat and not Asians..... Yet, I only had a dew friends here.....
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Old May 19, 2006, 05:53 AM   #4 (permalink)
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Re: Hate.....

Very dark and I like the way you used the repetition of dark words.
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Old May 19, 2006, 06:24 AM   #5 (permalink)
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Thank you..... I guess I'll make a war poem for a person here that wants some.....
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Not me I'm done with wars Maybe about a survivour after a war?
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Roger I'll make two poems then, one for you that is a survivor, and the other one for that person..... We should stop this `cause we'll be warned again.....
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Okay, but mine was just an idea ^^;
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