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Nov 09, 2006, 01:14 PM
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 Diamond in the Rough  Join Date: Jul 2006 Location: got stuck in a middle of a forest and stayed
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 Credits: 210 | hate and fire burn the hearts of who you desire bringing it all down to ashes set it all on fire until everything crashes all the hate burn in your eyes use the anger in your veins and tell them not to ever give lies put your anger in control like reins light it all up with a torch just make everthing go blaze leave all ashes and scorce let it go high like a wild raze though of it in class, so please comment
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Nov 10, 2006, 04:45 AM
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 Upcoming Legend  Join Date: Aug 2006 Location: A place called Midnight Sun know as Tranquility
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Credits: 1,176 | Re: hate and fire This poem has an angry feel to it. The only thing I really see wrong with it is a couple of spelling mistakes but other than that nice dark poem! Hope to see more of your work!
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Nov 11, 2006, 02:03 AM
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| Mercenary  Join Date: Jan 2006 Location: War zones around the globe...
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Credits: 901 | Re: hate and fire It adds to me when I'm at rage... This feeling I just don't know how to say... Everytime I came through this page, I just can't throw my anger far away... Great job... Keep it up... 
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Nov 11, 2006, 03:03 PM
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| ~ beri-chan ~  Join Date: Jun 2006 Location: Australia
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Credits: 260 | Re: hate and fire i liked the way you put the anger in it. Certainly has a great feel to it, however there are one or two spelling mistakes. Besdies that, its an interesting and emotive poem. ^ ^ Keep it up.
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Nov 12, 2006, 01:23 PM
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| Diamond in the Rough  Join Date: Apr 2006 Location: In a banana
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 Credits: 4,246 | Re: hate and fire wow Wolfy i liked it alot, the emotions were expressed really well.
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