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Reply With QuoteLOL I find it just so funny that we wrote a poem about the same................um............you know lol.
Hate on me, I gives no f***
'bout what you're tellin' me!
Your words only increases my
hatred's longevity!
Keep playin' games with me.
You're nothing but a kid!
Tryin' to act like you're
proud of what you just did!
Toyin' with me... Like my
life isn't bad enough!
You always gotta stir s***
up, just to make things rough!
You can say that you don't
try to directly attack, but
I know that all you're doin'
is tryin' to get me back!
And that's foul! I haven't
spoke to you in days, yet
here you are tryin' to get
me to play your stupid games!
Go ahead, think you've won;
but this battle ain't over!
I'm planning my next move,
while all you do is fake "sober".
Depressed and alone, that's why
you give me such a hassle!
There's nobody in your life that
you can perpetually battle.
But, you always find a way
to push my every single button.
That's comin' to a stop!
Lemme tell ya somethin'...
F*** YOU!
LOL I find it just so funny that we wrote a poem about the same................um............you know lol.
Whoa.........whoa........I think I am sensing a lot of anger in this one........a LOT!!!!!
But I like it how you expressed it in words
Great job!!!!!!!
DO NOT MAKE ME UNLEASH MY INNER DEMON
Hey, thanks a bunch to the both of you for your comments! I'm glad you liked my angry poem. ^_^Originally Posted by Astaroth
This one was pretty much me venting. It happens from time to time, LOL. Thanks again you two!
whaaaoaoaoaoaoaoaoaoaoao(siren) Danger danger.
so feeling better sprout? have we any more anger to get out?
seriously man this is one he** of an angry poem.
but I like the part about where he pushes every single button.
I can feel the intensity of it... well done (Danger averted)
LOL, "Danger, Will Robinson--Danger!!"
Hey, Overload! Thanks for your comment, I greatly appreciate it! The part about pushing every button is my favorite part too, because it leads to the two words that pretty much make the point of what I was tryin' to say. Pretty much the whole poem was summed up in to two words, LOL.
I must say man that was a verry angry poem, sounds like one I had put up a while ago, great job man keep it up. (hum havent been in here in a while) anyways back on topic,The flow is good, however you do ryime in all the stanzas but sometimes it is a bit off, if you know what I mean. however it is still good and your point is well felt. lol keep it up!
ナサン フォオツド
Keep what you hold dear close for one day they may be gone forever!
Make one person smile for it will continue to spread but if you make a frown that will spread as well.http://www.animeonline.net/gallery/s...0/ppuser/57173
indeed, it is a mean poem, and yet, i sense that i know who its referencing to
good poem tho
"You will only have eyes for Me!"
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