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    Re: Hatred

    This poem was dramatic man. Why so much hate! It was a great poem with alot of imagery!

    Blood flows as I cry, making tears run red,
    Thats some deep stuff right thr man!
    Seems like you are realy mad and you need sleep
    lol !!
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    Wow,that was really awesome! I like it alot
    Made by- Ryomakurosaki (Thank you sooooo much!!) ^__^

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    Re: Hatred

    It was a very insightful poem, yet not too complex. I enjoyed it.

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    Blah!! I cannot believe I overlooked this piece. O.o

    Hatred,
    Beginning with loneliness,
    Blood flows as I cry, making tears run red,
    Loneliness gives way to bitterness,
    A start to endless darkness.
    Once again lonliness, hatred and isolation perfectly represented and displayed. The first stanza is my favourite part of the poem. Why? Simply because its the start of everything. Anything self loathing... I'll read. lol. ^_^

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    Re: Hatred

    Thanks everyone, and you too Reese.

    Thats some deep stuff right thr man!
    Seems like you are realy mad and you need sleep
    Lol. I'm always angry, I'm not a very content and happy soul.
    If I ever become a ghost, I'll probably be an evil spirit.
    You are not your job. You are not your bank account. You are not the contents of your wallet. You are not your ****ing Khakis. We are the all seeing all dancing crap of the world. You are not a beautiful and unique snowflake you are the same rotting organic matter as everything else. We are all part of the same compost heap.

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    Re: Hatred

    woa, that was great..........dark too

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