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    The Hatred

    Oh, bitch....
    your going to wish...
    that you didn't ever speak like you did.

    My eyes black with hatred.
    The thing i hate most,
    has occurred.

    With such force and a boast,
    your going to learn the error of your ways.

    Thrash my friends again,
    and find the burn,
    of a thousand black petals flowing,
    my hatred for you growing.

    The darkess in me has grown,
    to snuff any chance of life you have in this...
    and with a blown kiss,
    goodbye I give to you.

    A flame you'll die within,
    and again,
    you'll know what it's like to die.

    My "friend" and loosly I call you,
    for your going to be in more than two.
    Your mouth is running 90 to nothing,
    and your seriously chanting something,

    I just don't understand all your saying,
    for it's blah's that I hear,
    from your bitter lips that poisen can grow,
    and this is something i know.

    Don't be a whore.
    Don't be a bitch no more.
    Just go away from these people,
    that I care for.

    Give yourself a little time to cool,
    or is it a volcano your skin has been formed to?
    If so,
    then go dive in the ocean.
    I don't think they'd miss you,
    knowing....

    knowing the fact that your,
    gone from our lives....
    and that no tears can be shed,
    from our now happy eyes.

    I hate you,
    and mildly put....
    just go away from our lives,
    as your skin be from volcano fire,
    to molten soot.


    By: Black Petal

    "All flowers in the garden of life, have a dark side." ~White Rose~

    Far be it for me to be anything special, when the only special thing I desire with me, is the special person I share my gifts with.

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    love the poem chica!!!!
    and i love you too!!!
    nice words. nice expression.

    and i didnt know you cared!

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    This poem really displays the hatred perfectly! I don't know who you are mad at, but I feel sorry for the person who this poem is directed at! Nice job on this one!

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    Wow Justin. That was a really powerful poem. I thought it was beautiful. It's nice to see someone that can truly show their feelings through their poetry and make other people feel it too. That was a wonderful job honey. I'm so proud to call you mine. I can't wait to read more!
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    Man your poems are alway freaking awesome man.

    Oh, bitch....
    your going to wish...
    that you didn't ever speak like you did.
    I love the intro of your poem.

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