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Reply With Quotewow that is a great poem alittle on the scary side but still good
I wrote this about two years ago, when I was in a really, really bad mood. Today, in the dark mood I am in, I'm posting it for the first time. Please... I have very low self-esteemed, so try to be as subtle as you can when if you critize it...
Fire tears through the flesh
The hounds of hell nip at your feet
A satanic laughter rings out,
Causing an increase in heat
Flames course through your body,
Causing a bone chilling scream
Wishing for it to stop, it doesn't
An everlasting dream
Demons jeer and chant throughout
Sweat mingles with their putrid smell
Pointing and cheering all the day
Within the confines of hell
Tears pour down your face
Sizzling on the ground below
Eyes wide with glee,
As hatred takes its toll
Trapped forever in your mind,
The hatred shall remain,
Forever blossoming,
A force unable to be tamed.
DEMON SPAWN IS AWESOME!!!!! XP
wow that is a great poem alittle on the scary side but still good
Wow I really liked this poem.. the title caught my eye.. this is really deep and I say that you should post more!! I really liked this work!
Thank you Lasura!My lover speaks; and he says, 'Arise my beloved my beautiful one and come!' -Song of Songs 2:10
Wow! This was really good Wolf! I liked it alot.I could so feel the hate and saddness in this poem.Awesome job and I can't wait 2 read more.
Made by- Ryomakurosaki (Thank you sooooo much!!) ^__^
woot~ i like this poem its great! its a dark kind and i love it! the pain, sadness and hatred combined.
i like the poem alot it was real dark
this was my faveTrapped forever in your mind,
The hatred shall remain,
Forever blossoming,
A force unable to be tamed.
JADERABBIT~ EVERYONE TAKE THIS AS A EXAMPLE OF HOW NOT TO POST! NEXT TIME shippo ITS BAN FROM POEMS SECTION.
Last edited by jaderabbit; Nov 08, 2006 at 10:43 AM.
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nice poem.... a little on the creepy side though... ^^"
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To think . . . all this hatred (obviously), pain, and anger from a Geometry class . . . . You rock my socks. Post your poem about The End.
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