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Diamond in the Rough Join Date: Aug 2006 Location: Just a hopscotch away from Never Never Land...
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![]() ![]() Credits: 987 | Hatred I wrote this about two years ago, when I was in a really, really bad mood. Today, in the dark mood I am in, I'm posting it for the first time. Please... I have very low self-esteemed, so try to be as subtle as you can when if you critize it... Fire tears through the flesh The hounds of hell nip at your feet A satanic laughter rings out, Causing an increase in heat Flames course through your body, Causing a bone chilling scream Wishing for it to stop, it doesn't An everlasting dream Demons jeer and chant throughout Sweat mingles with their putrid smell Pointing and cheering all the day Within the confines of hell Tears pour down your face Sizzling on the ground below Eyes wide with glee, As hatred takes its toll Trapped forever in your mind, The hatred shall remain, Forever blossoming, A force unable to be tamed.
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![]() ![]() Credits: 1,595 | Re: Hatred Wow I really liked this poem.. the title caught my eye.. this is really deep and I say that you should post more!! I really liked this work!
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![]() ![]() Credits: 3,351 | Re: Hatred Wow! This was really good Wolf! I liked it alot.I could so feel the hate and saddness in this poem.Awesome job and I can't wait 2 read more. ![]()
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![]() Credits: 4,246 | Re: Hatred i like the poem alot it was real dark Quote:
JADERABBIT~ EVERYONE TAKE THIS AS A EXAMPLE OF HOW NOT TO POST! NEXT TIME shippo ITS BAN FROM POEMS SECTION.
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![]() ![]() Credits: 650 | Re: Hatred nice poem.... a little on the creepy side though... ^^"
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![]() ![]() Credits: 59,274 | Re: Hatred To think . . . all this hatred (obviously), pain, and anger from a Geometry class . . . . You rock my socks. Post your poem about The End.
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![]() ![]() Credits: 410 | Re: Hatred Wow, I don't know what to say about this poem but it's absolutely amazing! I love it! The title made me want to read this poem so I went ahead and read. It's good that you write poems based on how you feel. I do that a lot with most of my poems and songs. XD Keep up the good work!
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![]() ![]() Credits: 987 | Re: Hatred Heh...thank you!!!! That makes me feel all fuzzy inside!!! Yay fuzziness!!!
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