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    Hatred: The unmoved emotion

    *Warning*




    It starts with one…

    One thing, I don’t know why
    It doesn’t even matter how hard you try
    Keep that in mind when the time is right
    All is going to either fall apart or create

    A new human, a new heart, whichever it will be
    No matter how hard you try it doesn’t matter
    For these people, everything is desire

    Fuel my angst with your thoughts and faces
    With your selfish motives and decisions
    Others didn’t care, because I’m simply falling apart

    Left behind in the rain of needles
    While you guys carried in your own life
    Sheltered by each other, forgetting the warmth I used to give you
    Used, shattered, elapsed while you guys pushed me to the limits

    I put my trust in you, all my, gone as far as I could
    You should remember it too
    Shit, you couldn’t even remember how many lives you guys wrecked
    Or how many guys that whore played with

    To others you're angels
    In reality you’re not even worth a broken halo
    To the public improved people
    Inside you know you’re going to carry on

    My pure hatred towards all of you “friends”
    That whore, this player guy, these friends obsessed with shit
    Is never going to end, this endless hate towards you

    You might have convinced the WORLD of your pureness
    But in fact you’re not worth spitting
    You’re one step closer
    For me to rip your pathetic minds and hearts away

    Stab you to your demise

    And put your lifeless, deserving bodies under the rain.

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    Re: Hatred: The unmoved emotion

    Looks like someone needs a hug yes?

    No Joking.

    It seems like most of your poems Rave_Grip. [&&] I've read many of your poems~
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    Re: Hatred: The unmoved emotion

    I made happy ones too ^_^ Can't help it, never felt any love or anything to inspire me So i write the most common theme. Oh well.

    And Please just call me Rave or by my real name, No Rave_Grip, not by you anyway.

    P.S
    A hug is just won't make any difference. Pssh.

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    Re: Hatred: The unmoved emotion

    Eh, doesnt seem that original with the borrowed lines from Linkin Park.
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    Re: Hatred: The unmoved emotion

    Yeah it does. Strange I didn't mention it -scratches head- ahh well, I guess people know now.
    Thanks Kasai.

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    Re: Hatred: The unmoved emotion

    Quote Originally Posted by Kasai View Post
    Eh, doesnt seem that original with the borrowed lines from Linkin Park.
    I knew I heard that first couple of lines somewhere before.

    The poem confused me, because by the time I really started understanding what it was about... It had gotten all dark and twisted and scary. Partly psychotic even.

    It didn't start out that way. It started out mild, and confusing. Its like in the end you just snapped out into this dark weird place. Now, If the whole poem where just as crazy as the ending I may have said it was a good poem.
    ... Not Ever Again...

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    Re: Hatred: The unmoved emotion

    I really like it. Makes me think of my life when I was little. That was really good. Keep it up Rave.

    Our love will go on until the end of time. I will always be yours and you will be mine.

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    Re: Hatred: The unmoved emotion

    Hey it does have lines by Linkin Park!! I thought I was just having some weird form of dejavu. Another emotional poem. It's good. Nice work.

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