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    Re: Hatred: The unmoved emotion

    I was a good poem although it was a little angry cause it seems like someone needs some lovin'. Great job.
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    Re: Hatred: The unmoved emotion

    Quote Originally Posted by Mr. K View Post
    Looks like someone needs a hug yes?

    No Joking.

    It seems like most of your poems Rave_Grip. [&&] I've read many of your poems~
    Agreed ..
    Most of your poems seems to point at one direction - a girl who appears to be nice but is actually hurting you and your friends ( you also mentioned many times she's a whore ._. ) but I'm not gonna question any futher
    I spotted the Linkin Park line and thought you were gonna copy the entire song lyrics O_O (tho it is a good song ) I prefered some of your other works, I'll rate an OK for this piece ._.

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    Re: Hatred: The unmoved emotion

    hey i thought u put them lyrics for linkin park
    nice poem rave... and sheesh how did u get inspiration from that

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    Re: Hatred: The unmoved emotion

    I like it Rave.
    It's really good.
    It has so much emotion and well yeah it's just good.(^.^)lol

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