Way to go, Alondra! *applauds use of puncuation* ^_^
On a seriuos note, I am really impressed with this poem! Up until your first poem a while back, I had no idea that you had writing talent and this poem confirms it!
I like the structure of your writing and how each stanza is evenly written. Your rhyming skills are what really caught me off guard. Kudos, LaLa! You get a gold star, LOL!
One more thing:
Shouldn't it be like this?To wanting something so bad,
now it was just something I had.
Yeah, I'm a grammar whore! LOL.From wanting something so bad,
now it was just something I had.![]()


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