have u ever had ur heart broken

*equinn* · Oct 15, 2006, 01:14 AM

have u ever had your heat broken
cos i have
it gets to your heart and fills it
full of hate and surrow
if u havent had it broken
you will never know how
to feel the darknss
cropt your body
so now i have now a cold heart
you may even say im heatless
coz now i feel i can never feel love again

JefferyXie · Oct 15, 2006, 01:23 AM

hey dis poems is quite touching.Its short yet it has a feeling of sadness.I lyk dat.

*Rave_Grip* · Oct 15, 2006, 04:44 AM

Spelling mistakes here and there...
Otherwise it's good, and very real too. ^_^

baikuza · Oct 15, 2006, 04:48 AM

heart break...
after you had a heart break you may not get it again for couple of times.
i know... it is hard to love again. (+_+)

*equinn* · Oct 15, 2006, 05:03 AM

thank you for ur really nice comments ^_^

*Rave_Grip* · Oct 15, 2006, 05:03 AM

I agree with him, you descried the exactly the way it feels! I hope you didn't have it

*equinn* · Oct 15, 2006, 05:10 AM

awwwww i did once but that dosnt mater right now ^_^ thats why i try to be sooo happy

baikuza · Oct 15, 2006, 05:15 AM

good.
the world is still runing even we are sad. keep moving. there still a lot positive things we can find out there.
hope you can find some thing that can make you cheer up.
haha... lets get some fun although tomorrow is monday. haha
but after those job is can be said OK. (^^)

*equinn* · Oct 15, 2006, 06:40 AM

yeah i know but i have a math test (awww how i hate maths) ^_^ so thanks for the comment ^__^

Sazzy · Oct 15, 2006, 07:12 AM

its a nice short poem really!!

*equinn* · Oct 15, 2006, 07:23 AM

thank you sazzy ^_^ it means alot to know i can do a poem cos i haven told anyone about them yet
TT__TT ^_^

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