hey dis poems is quite touching.Its short yet it has a feeling of sadness.I lyk dat.
have u ever had your heat broken
cos i have
it gets to your heart and fills it
full of hate and surrow
if u havent had it broken
you will never know how
to feel the darknss
cropt your body
so now i have now a cold heart
you may even say im heatless
coz now i feel i can never feel love again
hey dis poems is quite touching.Its short yet it has a feeling of sadness.I lyk dat.
Spelling mistakes here and there...
Otherwise it's good, and very real too. ^_^
heart break...
after you had a heart break you may not get it again for couple of times.
i know... it is hard to love again. (+_+)
thank you for ur really nice comments ^_^
I agree with him, you descried the exactly the way it feels! I hope you didn't have it![]()
awwwww i did once but that dosnt mater right now ^_^ thats why i try to be sooo happy
good.
the world is still runing even we are sad. keep moving. there still a lot positive things we can find out there.
hope you can find some thing that can make you cheer up.
haha... lets get some fun although tomorrow is monday. haha
but after those job is can be said OK. (^^)
Last edited by baikuza; Oct 15, 2006 at 05:23 AM. Reason: ++
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