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    have you ever wondered why

    well this poem isn't as good as the past ones , this one doesn't build onthe same thought or idea , it continuesly changes from a thought to another,,
    ps , i read some say in a reply , { you must really love someone} here's the truth
    i never been loved and never loved , everybody likes to reject me how can they fall for me ,, poeple misjudge for looks or sounds or the way you dress ,,
    anyways hope you like the poem
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    i fell welling up inside
    with everything thats has built in the light
    as i wonder and wait
    in the cold nights
    and the suns first worm lights

    i see the sky
    and wonder why it's so high
    i laugh and say : this is not a lie
    i wonder if i die
    who would cry ?

    what is death ?
    i wonder if it's just a myth

    is there any meaning for this
    i wonder each and everyday
    who would be my friend

    i wonder if this is why i cry
    is this the reason i want to die?
    i lost hope
    i lost my will

    to come and think about it
    i wonder why i'm locked in this world
    a world built on my thoughts
    a world that could never come true

    a world i built when i felt so desprete to belong somewhere
    a world i could see no-one in with me
    even so and i belong

    but why
    i am living in a lie
    i would like to know why

    in my wonders cry
    tears that are so dry
    tears that even people think that they are a lie

    as i try
    to testefy
    the reasons why

    before i go away
    in this rainy day
    i will try
    to fight this feeling away

    and not die
    and not to surrender to everyones lies
    just to look forword

    to look forword and know and not wonder why ......
    Power -xxx- aka -M.Ali
    I Fly Swiftly through the air
    I Spread My Wings Without A trace

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    Re: have you ever wondered why

    Quote Originally Posted by powerxxx
    i will try
    to fight this feeling away

    and not die
    and not to surrender to everyones lies
    just to look forword

    to look forword and know and not wonder why ......
    I really enjoyed it! Bravo! I especially liked the ending
    You laugh at me because I'm different. I laugh at you because your all the same.

    Thanks Hieislove for the siggy!

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