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    Child Of God Kiani Haki22 is off to a good start Kiani Haki22's Avatar
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    He Was Always Here

    I feel so far away from him
    But I am so close
    He right in front of my face
    But I don't see him

    He has always been there
    But I couldn't feel his sweet embrace
    He has always held me when I cried
    But I didn't feel him wipe away my tears

    He knows me more than I know myself
    But I never knew
    He has always been a giving friend
    But I always used him

    I knew I loved him
    But I couldn't admit it to myself
    He's always loved me
    But I could never feel his love touch my soul

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    Re: He Was Always Here

    You are very good with words, Shawna. I like the bottom paragraph because lately, not
    here, I have been reading poems that felt they weren't quiet finished or didn't have a
    satisfying ending.

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