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    He comes

    When the doors are closed...
    and the lights go out..

    He comes out of the mists...
    waiting...
    watching...
    you.

    You are the one he hungers for..
    the blade he holds
    dripping with blood...

    He lusts for yours...
    he must have it

    There's no other way...
    And there you are..
    in you room...
    alone.

    Unknowing...
    so vulnerable
    and yet so young

    A heart so pure
    life so youthful

    But you are the one..
    so it must be done..

    And as you are sleeing..
    He comes from the dark shadows...
    and raises the blade..

    He ignores the screams...
    the pain he sees in her eyes..

    When there is no sound to be heard...

    He lifts up the blade...
    dripping with her blood...

    Stabs his own saddened heart
    filled with grief...

    ..By death do lovers part...
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    Re: He comes

    hiya, that was awesome, kinda sad, but really good.

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    Re: He comes

    @.@ eek... why did he killed himself? sheesh i thought it was homosidal case or something,.. xD

    Nicely done.. vivid picture of it was inserted nicely...the flow is a bit stucky though

    good job.. ^^ keep up the good work

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    thank you shouichishindo for the comment^^ much appreciated
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    Waii~ youre skilled it would take me a long time to do that
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    Re: He comes

    interesting poem,it toke me some time to understand it.so he killed himself because he wanted to save her life?

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