Head Over Heels

Star Girl · Oct 21, 2006, 11:48 AM

Every once in a while
Im not afraid to cry
It took all my courage to tell you
Be there to catch me
When I trip and fall

Help me spread these wings
Hold onto me
As i make these mistakes over again

Wash away my pain
Repair my world to the top
Create an obstacle
To keep me sane

Dress me up in endless colors
To keep me happy forever

Sink in your finger tips
I'll Cherish these touches

Forgive me if I behave in ways
You think is strange
Its just that no one makes me feel this way

fma1012 · Oct 21, 2006, 11:51 AM

I love it, I can somewhat relate to it. Nice job. ^^

anime cutie · Oct 21, 2006, 11:52 AM

wow i like that, that was nice ^^ id love to see more of ure work

*ketaro* · Oct 22, 2006, 06:43 AM

I like the rhymes at the end of each sentence, nice job.

Shippo101 · Oct 24, 2006, 09:50 AM

That was awsome and very well put, keep it up.

And i cant wait to see the rest of you work.

Oct 21, 2006, 11:48 AM	#1 (permalink)
Star Girl Diamond in the Rough Join Date: Apr 2006 Location: Terabithia Posts: 169 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Credits: 273	Head Over Heels Every once in a while Im not afraid to cry It took all my courage to tell you Be there to catch me When I trip and fall Help me spread these wings Hold onto me As i make these mistakes over again Wash away my pain Repair my world to the top Create an obstacle To keep me sane Dress me up in endless colors To keep me happy forever Sink in your finger tips I'll Cherish these touches Forgive me if I behave in ways You think is strange Its just that no one makes me feel this way
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Oct 21, 2006, 11:51 AM	#2 (permalink)
fma1012 Diamond in the Rough Join Date: Jun 2006 Location: earth omg! xD Posts: 470 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Credits: 1,593	Re: Head Over Heals I love it, I can somewhat relate to it. Nice job. ^^ __________________ ThAnKs CaNdId FoR ThE SwEet SiG~
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Oct 21, 2006, 11:52 AM	#3 (permalink)
anime cutie Newbie Join Date: Jun 2006 Location: up your nose!!! Posts: 57 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Credits: 238	Re: Head Over Heals wow i like that, that was nice ^^ id love to see more of ure work
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Oct 22, 2006, 06:43 AM	#4 (permalink)
ketaro kitty Join Date: Apr 2005 Location: 404 Not Found Posts: 4,205 Thanks: 22 Thanked 29 Times in 27 Posts Credits: 22,249	Re: Head Over Heals I like the rhymes at the end of each sentence, nice job. __________________ Thank you for the siggy baby ^^x..
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Oct 24, 2006, 09:50 AM	#5 (permalink)
Shippo101 Diamond in the Rough Join Date: Apr 2006 Location: In a banana Posts: 220 Thanks: 11 Thanked 1 Time in 1 Post Credits: 4,246	Re: Head Over Heels That was awsome and very well put, keep it up. And i cant wait to see the rest of you work. __________________ The heavens laugh at our foolish deed and the greed we exceed
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