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    Talking Heal me....

    Crying tear by tear falling from my eyes,
    it does not matter how hard I try to release my pain.
    I have tried so hard to change just by myself,
    but now i know that i can't do it without you...

    I am just a human I'm so weak without you Lord;
    I need you in my heart I need to be born again.
    I have fail so many times and I have hurt your heart...
    I ask your forgiveness and your healing hand.

    How do I Know that you erased my past...
    If my mind keeps reminding me the wrong things I have done?
    How do I know that there is no more sin in me...
    If there is something telling me that you are to Holy to love a sinner like me?

    Jesus now i know that I need you
    To your feet I come bleeding and hurt.
    I'm broken my Lord, my soul cries for you.
    Heal me with your holy presence,
    and let me know that I'm clean...
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    Re: Heal me....

    A really nice poem, I admire the strength of your believe... It's wonderful... I too feel like this sometimes and the worst thing is that it feels like if you couldn't do anything about it... But I'm sure he forgives you...
    This reminded me of a song we sing with the chorus, it's called "Help me" (only in Latvian), after reading your post, I'm sure I'll sing it better for I understand it in a different way...

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    Re: Heal me....

    A poem with religious connotations is always worth reading.To pray and be humble with your words and really mean it,the Lord should answer you as he always answers people who humble themselves rather than boasting about good they are and the good things they do.

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    Re: Heal me....

    A very good poem, and capitalization would be better. Very religious poem too and I love it ^_^

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    Re: Heal me....

    very good you are good at writing poems I wish I could be that good too. I think you have talent and you are a strong believer. sometimes you cant get rid of every thing you just have to find something twice as nice to help you through it and eventually it will be gone.
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