how that really strikes me...i don't have them courage 2 do so...~.~
i can never do something that hard...all i could do is sit and wait...
healing
the time for healing has come, for i know who she is
the time for love has come, i know where she lives
the time for being together has come.
im not alone, i know what to do
not to be afraid or misused
the only way is to take the chance
the chance to ask is here at last
i should not flinch, i should not run
this is my only chance for what i belive to be true love
healing is upon me, i shall make the move
to the girl that i adore with all my heart
the time for me to move on and heal myself is here at last.
ive healed these cuts and bruises in my heart.
you didnt get this from me.... im supposed to be dark....
double poem for you to enjoy!
~torn apart~
a man with a dream
a man with a plan
the plan was for greatness
but it was all for not
hurting was all he knew
alone was all he knew
he wished to tell her
but he didnt want to here the answer
torn apart was he
on the inside and out
depression was he
for the love of his life left him
with out saying a word
he went on and on
torn apart was he
till he could not hold unto himself
he was torn apart by love and fear
just a reminder to those in love or those who like someone let them know, dont live in fear for you could lose that person...
Last edited by god of death; Feb 26, 2007 at 08:47 AM. Reason: adding second poem
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how that really strikes me...i don't have them courage 2 do so...~.~
i can never do something that hard...all i could do is sit and wait...
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Very well expressed bro! I mean there is no point in sitting there when you like someone! Find the courage within yourself and tell them how you feel! Great job!![]()
I like the theme,poem is worth reading and the shift in tempo is great.
thanks my freinds! i really do appricate your comments, weither good or bad.
and i figured i write too much dark a little light to sparkle everynow and then is a good thing
I am the God Of Death, Reaper of the souls, hunter of the darkness......
http://z13.invisionfree.com/Deaths_doorway/index.php
this is my site come and see me there sometime!
i liked the second one. It made me think of how sometimes you are just an empty shell when something bad happens in life. Just going through the motions. I don't know if that was what you were going for but it was good. it made me think.
all poems have different meanings for each of us, but yes that was what i was going through
I am the God Of Death, Reaper of the souls, hunter of the darkness......
http://z13.invisionfree.com/Deaths_doorway/index.php
this is my site come and see me there sometime!
hey Death these are really good looks like you've been busy I love the first one its very beautiful and proactive lol![]()
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