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    healing

    healing

    the time for healing has come, for i know who she is
    the time for love has come, i know where she lives
    the time for being together has come.

    im not alone, i know what to do
    not to be afraid or misused
    the only way is to take the chance

    the chance to ask is here at last
    i should not flinch, i should not run
    this is my only chance for what i belive to be true love

    healing is upon me, i shall make the move
    to the girl that i adore with all my heart
    the time for me to move on and heal myself is here at last.

    ive healed these cuts and bruises in my heart.

    you didnt get this from me.... im supposed to be dark....


    double poem for you to enjoy!
    ~torn apart~
    a man with a dream
    a man with a plan
    the plan was for greatness
    but it was all for not

    hurting was all he knew
    alone was all he knew
    he wished to tell her
    but he didnt want to here the answer

    torn apart was he
    on the inside and out
    depression was he
    for the love of his life left him

    with out saying a word
    he went on and on
    torn apart was he
    till he could not hold unto himself

    he was torn apart by love and fear


    just a reminder to those in love or those who like someone let them know, dont live in fear for you could lose that person...
    Last edited by god of death; Feb 26, 2007 at 09:47 AM. Reason: adding second poem
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    Re: healing

    how that really strikes me...i don't have them courage 2 do so...~.~
    i can never do something that hard...all i could do is sit and wait...

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    Re: healing

    Very well expressed bro! I mean there is no point in sitting there when you like someone! Find the courage within yourself and tell them how you feel! Great job!

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    Re: healing

    I like the theme,poem is worth reading and the shift in tempo is great.

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    Re: healing

    thanks my freinds! i really do appricate your comments, weither good or bad.
    and i figured i write too much dark a little light to sparkle everynow and then is a good thing
    I am the God Of Death, Reaper of the souls, hunter of the darkness......
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    Re: healing

    i liked the second one. It made me think of how sometimes you are just an empty shell when something bad happens in life. Just going through the motions. I don't know if that was what you were going for but it was good. it made me think.
    every rose has a thorn

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    Re: healing

    all poems have different meanings for each of us, but yes that was what i was going through
    I am the God Of Death, Reaper of the souls, hunter of the darkness......
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    Re: healing

    hey Death these are really good looks like you've been busy I love the first one its very beautiful and proactive lol

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