life is messed up I don't know why I'm still here,
I was thinking of killing myself along time ago,
but I haven't yet.
there is something missing before i do suicide,
but I don't know what it is,
I thought I did once...
But I was wrong it was a mistake to ask her
A very big mistake that I have made.
What I thought was real is really fake,
What I thought was an angel was really a demon,
a whole heart ripped in half
that other half was eaten infront of me,
the demon that was once an angel.
I'll never be the same again from that day,
Now I'm just a dead soul living a life that is not mine
but I don't care I'll die again....
But this time I won't have a heart...
Just a black void that was once my heart.
That's mean now you did not have that nice red heart because of her ..*black one*..
really sad and she hrt you and you now differnet person...How Graet ..
Nice work ..I love read it ...Keep it up..
I know what you must do before you commit suicide. You must do EVERYTHING first... Live every moment of your life to the fullest.
I thought this poem was okay really did not care for it but keep trying.
Hmm... i like the methaphors.. ^^ :p *munchs something dripping with red ooze* hmm?
what u lookin at? *snears*
xD jk ^^ keep up the good work.. :)
Great jon and keep up the good work!!!!