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    Re: Heart ache.

    thank you Ice your feedback is most welcome. and most of the time what I post in poems is what is on my mind or how I actally feel and I dont know if it aplefies the poem or not but yeah.
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    Re: Heart ache.

    Definately shows emotion. Too bad it's not longer, though.

    *hugs*

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    thank you Bizzy. I appreciate all the feed back I get on the poems no matter how bad it is or how sad it is I apprecieate all feedback I get.
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    Re: Heart ache.

    ahhh^^ i enjoyed reading your poem^^ its really good

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    thank you black rose. I appreciate your input. if there is anything I can do to improve them just let me know.
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    Re: Heart ache.

    you are good with words
    and i'm sorry u r hurting rite
    now . things will get better in time
    so love your poem keep them coming okay

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    Thank you Chrystalann I apreciate it and you dont have to worry this is just another obsticle in my path to get over and I will in dew time. Just have to forget.
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    Re: Heart ache.

    AWWWW I know the feeling.. i have had it before.. -.- It's a great poem that i'm sure alot of people can relate too^^

    sorry but i have to go.... *starts to tear up* I've hurt someone and i know he feels this way.. bye~

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