Heart Pain

O heart I see
You’re killing me
I do not see
What your purpose
Maybe

What are you?
You are not mine

Are you the heart from the destructed shadow?
That has no physical form
Torn
Broken
Alone
Because all the pain it felt
From its pervious vessel

Or did you belong to the man
Who
Shoved the arrow thought you
Because
His wife
Left him
Took the kids
The house
And his will to live

Or maybe to the old Woman
That worried so much about
Little
Tiny Betty
That when Betty died
Old lady
Left not to long afterwards
Old Lady left you behind
And you were left to
Wither away it the
Darkness known as Earth

Well I am sorry for all the
Pain
Hurt
Misery
Agony
You felt
Sorry that you can’t
Make a home
Were I
Threw away my heart
So I can’t feel the pain
You feel now

Sorry you are seeing the world for what it is
Sorry you are seeing the world for what it will be
Sorry NO one signed in a will that said you are mine
Sorry that you are you a human heart
I am so past sorry that you are dieing.

awesome poem man,
loved it it's kinda sad too
"Pain
Hurt
Misery
Agony"
I know how that feels T-T lovely poem

It seemed really choppy to me. I think it's your wording and lack of punctuation.

Quote:

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Sorry you are seeing the world for what it is
Sorry you are seeing the world for what it will be
Sorry NO one signed in a will that said you are mine
Sorry that you are you a human heart
I am so past sorry that you are dieing.

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The poem itself is okay, but I don't like the way you wrote it. I'm not a big fan of the one word lines, though I sometimes use them myself. I love the sad, dark theme though and I love the final stanza. Keep them coming! Can't wait to read more.

The poem is okay, but it needs more working done. Rhyming words would be a good option :)
And make happier ones. Good job ^_^

I like it but like eveeryone siad you need more punctuation and I like the one word lines that shows where you want us to foccus on most. Those words that mean the most. Keep it up. I hope to see more.(^.^)