Wow this poem was very interesting. It was sad and romantic! I loved it keep it up equinn!^^
Heat shaped dagger
My love my life
All I long for is only one kiss
One touch from your lips
To rub my body agent yours...
Then I could easily rest in peace
After your love for me is gone...
Ill just want to die
Ill want to stab myself with my heart shaped dagger
Witch is made up of many colours
It’s just like a mood ring actually...
It changes its colour when in love red, crush, pink, heart break a dark blue....
Death.... it turns black and crumbles beside you while you die your painful
So would you love me....?
Even for just this one night and I can easily rest in peace.......
ok equinn the 3 stanza was umm*ahem* anyways umm besides that it was romantic but then it started getting dreppresing...but its good keep it ↑ ♥~*The Princess*~♥
that a great poem equinn it reminds me of my recent first love i miss her greatly even though i see her every day here at school she won't talk to me so i know how u feel and i still feel some pain to this day even though its been two months since we first met and it didn't last long so ur pains probly ten times then mine so i am srry for u and i feel ur pain of a lost love
well i must say that I really like this one.
but then again I try to find all of the poems that you write.
thank you all for the comments much apre seated ^^