From Heaven to Hell

Sorry if I misspelled anything but over all I like this poem.

From Heaven to Hell

From Heavento Hell thats my life
it happens to often
I can't bear it.

I'll be in the clouds
only feeling happiness
not careing what could happen next.
Then it happens

From Heaven to Hell
thats my life
it happens so often
I can't bear it.

Now I'm in the pits of hell
I only fell sorrow.
Scared of what might happen next
Then it happens

From Heaven to Hell
thats my life
it happens so often
I can't bear it

I'm back in the clouds
I only happiness
not careing what could happen next
Then it starts all over

From Heaven to Hell
thats my life
it happens so often
I can't bear it.

Well thats it I know it may not seem as much but I hope you all like it in some way.

~!!! I can see the transitional flow that you planted into this poem, by detailing the characteristic state in heaven and in hell, but overall, it's pretty simple. However, it contains a good meaning. Next time, try to elaborate a little more. ^_^ All in all, it's a neat little poem. Keep the good work.

-> Corrected the title.

its good i like it, the way it keeps changing etc its a realy unique idea and i think youve made it work well, good job