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    Heaven's Angel

    Tears flow as I stand by your grave,
    Under the moonlit night,
    Still wondering why,
    Heaven has taken their angel back.

    As I walk away from your grave,
    I look up to the star filled sky,
    Wishing you were here,
    As tears continue to fall from crimson eyes.
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    Re: Heaven's Angel

    Interesting piece and the use of Angel as metaphor for one you loved is clever.

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    Re: Heaven's Angel

    wow. i really don't know what to say... It was very beautiful.
    Though u could have found a diffrent word to use instead of "bloodshot". It kind of ruined some of the mood in the poem. XD

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