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    Heirarchy IV

    Heirarchy

    Part IV

    The days grew long, and night’s cold,
    For their mischievousness grew bold,
    The king grew tiresome of mysteries,
    His daughter disappeared habitually

    Upon his throne he thought warily,
    of how to approach the matter cautiously.
    He sent out spies to watch the yards,
    secretly informing the castle guards.

    “With peaceful minds keep an eye,
    and of what you see, tell my spy.”
    They quickly obeyed without dispute
    For fear of the kings pervasive repute.
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    Re: Heirarchy IV

    this story was really well written and I liked how each part picked up where the other left off. I can't wait to read part 5.
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    Re: Heirarchy IV

    Y'know, I know I am way, way off but.. I feel a Midsummer Night's Dream thing going on, even though it's not as good a fit as my Romeo and Juliet comparison, but eh, maybe I just want to read the book again..
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    I finally found this poem. I nearly forgot about it. I have read all of them up till now and appreciate them or it as the best poem I have read on AO. Just something about it that really makes an image in your head. Keep writing and post part 5. I will be waiting as before.

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