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    Hell is here

    hell is here
    so you had better fear
    what comes from beneath
    will unleash its wrath
    from the flames of hades
    to the darkness of shadows
    hell is here
    so have some fear

    hell is here
    the end is near
    blood will rain all over the land
    blood of people falling from heaven
    death is in the air
    so you had better beware
    cause hell is here
    so have fear!



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    Re: Hell is here

    ummmmm........ it is good. i like it. it has a alot of feeling of hate and rage. good job.
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    Re: Hell is here

    thanks i was a bit pissed off when i did this so i decided to let all my rage out in a poem



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    Re: Hell is here

    Nice, dark, evil, hellish poem!!! ^^ Reminded me of a poem I made... it's about hell too, but the atitude to this all is the oposite. The poem is very old, I was 10 when I wrote this.
    There is something
    Inside your mind,
    That makes me run,
    That makes me hide.
    Lets go and find out
    What is mine
    Lets go in darkness
    And make some crime.
    Lets leave this world
    We have the time! ^^
    Just though I should stand against your interpretation of hell, with mine- fun variant ^^

    But this is a great poem indeed... enjoyed reading it...

    My recommended fanfic: "Dreamer" by Scourge

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    Re: Hell is here

    well it seems like great minds think alike then lasura that little poem was cool i think



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    Re: Hell is here

    this poem is really angry just like everyone
    here is saying and how you express your anger
    by using hell is really good , most people think
    that when youy get angry or hatefull its because
    a little bit of hell resides in you but thats just for some
    not everyone belives that.


    awesome poem i like this one alot
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and all your demons
    I'll be the one to protect you from a will to survive and a voice of reason
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and your choices son
    They're one in the same, I must isolate you...
    Isolate and save you from yourself

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    Re: Hell is here

    thanks to you as well its great to have people like your poems really it is



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    Re: Hell is here

    Oh wow!!! Thats a lot of rage coming from this poem but it was good as well as you can see! Bravo!!!! (Claps) So I hope to see more!!!
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