Thread: Hell is here

ummmmm........ it is good. i like it. it has a alot of feeling of hate and rage. good job.

thanks i was a bit pissed off when i did this so i decided to let all my rage out in a poem

Nice, dark, evil, hellish poem!!! ^^ Reminded me of a poem I made... it's about hell too, but the atitude to this all is the oposite. The poem is very old, I was 10 when I wrote this.
There is something
Inside your mind,
That makes me run,
That makes me hide.
Lets go and find out
What is mine
Lets go in darkness
And make some crime.
Lets leave this world
We have the time! ^^
Just though I should stand against your interpretation of hell, with mine- fun variant ^^

But this is a great poem indeed... enjoyed reading it...

well it seems like great minds think alike then lasura that little poem was cool i think

this poem is really angry just like everyone
here is saying and how you express your anger
by using hell is really good , most people think
that when youy get angry or hatefull its because
a little bit of hell resides in you but thats just for some
not everyone belives that.


awesome poem i like this one alot

thanks to you as well its great to have people like your poems really it is

Oh wow!!! Thats a lot of rage coming from this poem but it was good as well as you can see! Bravo!!!! (Claps) So I hope to see more!!!