Hell is here

aeonking · Jun 13, 2007, 05:45 AM

hell is here
so you had better fear
what comes from beneath
will unleash its wrath
from the flames of hades
to the darkness of shadows
hell is here
so have some fear

hell is here
the end is near
blood will rain all over the land
blood of people falling from heaven
death is in the air
so you had better beware
cause hell is here
so have fear!

ryomakurosaki · Jun 13, 2007, 05:55 AM

ummmmm........ it is good. i like it. it has a alot of feeling of hate and rage. good job.

aeonking · Jun 13, 2007, 05:57 AM

thanks i was a bit pissed off when i did this so i decided to let all my rage out in a poem

*Lasura* · Jun 13, 2007, 06:01 AM

Nice, dark, evil, hellish poem!!! ^^ Reminded me of a poem I made... it's about hell too, but the atitude to this all is the oposite. The poem is very old, I was 10 when I wrote this.
There is something
Inside your mind,
That makes me run,
That makes me hide.
Lets go and find out
What is mine
Lets go in darkness
And make some crime.
Lets leave this world
We have the time! ^^
Just though I should stand against your interpretation of hell, with mine- fun variant ^^

But this is a great poem indeed... enjoyed reading it...

aeonking · Jun 13, 2007, 06:03 AM

well it seems like great minds think alike then lasura that little poem was cool i think

*HolderOfTheDarkChalice* · Jun 13, 2007, 06:12 AM

this poem is really angry just like everyone
here is saying and how you express your anger
by using hell is really good , most people think
that when youy get angry or hatefull its because
a little bit of hell resides in you but thats just for some
not everyone belives that.

awesome poem i like this one alot

aeonking · Jun 13, 2007, 06:14 AM

thanks to you as well its great to have people like your poems really it is

KuwiRules145 · Jun 13, 2007, 09:58 AM

Oh wow!!! Thats a lot of rage coming from this poem but it was good as well as you can see! Bravo!!!! (Claps) So I hope to see more!!!

aeonking · Jun 13, 2007, 10:03 AM

you will see more i love creating dark and evil poems as it's easier to do and a great way to relaese all the rage and fury inside of you

tifa4cloud · Jun 13, 2007, 10:16 AM

omg its brilliant i love it so much anger and hate so much emotion

aeonking · Jun 13, 2007, 10:32 AM

why thank you tifa glad to see so many people like a dark poem

Jun 13, 2007, 05:45 AM	#1 (permalink)
aeonking Diamond in the Rough Join Date: May 2007 Location: In the shadows Posts: 231 Thanks: 3 Thanked 1 Time in 1 Post Credits: 2,641	Hell is here hell is here so you had better fear what comes from beneath will unleash its wrath from the flames of hades to the darkness of shadows hell is here so have some fear hell is here the end is near blood will rain all over the land blood of people falling from heaven death is in the air so you had better beware cause hell is here so have fear! __________________
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ryomakurosaki Diamond in the Rough Join Date: May 2007 Location: Where the angels play Posts: 268 Thanks: 17 Thanked 28 Times in 24 Posts Credits: 10,233	Re: Hell is here ummmmm........ it is good. i like it. it has a alot of feeling of hate and rage. good job. __________________ Can't believe I could think that he would just follow me everywhere I go I just wrestle with you in my dreams and wake up making love to my pillow Videos of the week(updated next on June 15):http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=PjAsrwW9ptU
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aeonking Diamond in the Rough Join Date: May 2007 Location: In the shadows Posts: 231 Thanks: 3 Thanked 1 Time in 1 Post Credits: 2,641	Re: Hell is here thanks i was a bit pissed off when i did this so i decided to let all my rage out in a poem __________________
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Lasura Angelic Join Date: Apr 2007 Location: In a Demon's Arms Posts: 1,866 Thanks: 56 Thanked 32 Times in 30 Posts Credits: 49,192	Re: Hell is here Nice, dark, evil, hellish poem!!! ^^ Reminded me of a poem I made... it's about hell too, but the atitude to this all is the oposite. The poem is very old, I was 10 when I wrote this. There is something Inside your mind, That makes me run, That makes me hide. Lets go and find out What is mine Lets go in darkness And make some crime. Lets leave this world We have the time! ^^ Just though I should stand against your interpretation of hell, with mine- fun variant ^^ But this is a great poem indeed... enjoyed reading it... __________________ My recommended fanfic: "Dreamer" by Scourge
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HolderOfTheDarkChalice Tournaments Won: 1 King Of Darkness Join Date: May 2006 Location: someplace where the only light is the moon above Posts: 2,795 Thanks: 21 Thanked 20 Times in 19 Posts Credits: 3,212	Re: Hell is here this poem is really angry just like everyone here is saying and how you express your anger by using hell is really good , most people think that when youy get angry or hatefull its because a little bit of hell resides in you but thats just for some not everyone belives that. awesome poem i like this one alot __________________ thanks mellow your sig is top notch http://www.animeonline.net/links/
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aeonking Diamond in the Rough Join Date: May 2007 Location: In the shadows Posts: 231 Thanks: 3 Thanked 1 Time in 1 Post Credits: 2,641	Re: Hell is here you will see more i love creating dark and evil poems as it's easier to do and a great way to relaese all the rage and fury inside of you __________________
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