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    Hell in a human heart.

    I wrote this a long time ago, so yeah…





    Hell, you know what that is?
    My heart that you have turned into
    A place for torture and misery
    Well you did, and if you’re the one shut up and read.

    You put me through all this
    For what, I asked. You didn’t answer
    You put me through hell, and guess what?
    You put me in deep, deep depression.

    It hurt like hell. I wanted to throw up.
    The wound cannot be healed
    I cried nights on and on

    And when I asked why did you do this?
    You finally replied
    “I am sorry, I don’t need you”
    I felt like breaking you apart. I really did.

    I wanted to hurt you like you’ve never been before
    You were the last person I wanted to hate,
    And now you made me despise you.
    You don’t know how much you wound me.

    You were sorry.
    No I was. You said you loved me.
    But you can’t anymore.
    Want to know how I feel?

    If you say sorry
    I don’t give a damn. I don’t care.
    If you can’t love me, don’t bother showing you to me.
    If you’re gonna die because your “perfect man” is gonna leave you or whatever
    Go ahead and die, don’t bother me anymore.

    I don’t care if you live.
    I don’t care if you die
    I don’t care what you think of me
    All I care is about me now.

    I spent too much of my time loving you
    I got nothing in return
    Nothing indeed.
    I told you if you still want to hurt me, don't reply, and you didn't.

    If you’re reading this, know this-
    I’m not a cold person. I am a human too
    I have emotions. I am not a doll, or a play toy.
    Hurt me again and you’ll regret it for the rest of your life.


    I do have a very strong urge to mention the names, though.

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    Re: Hel in a human heart.

    damn rushil!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    that was tight as all get out. nice emotions and expressions. your best yet. i like it.
    nice

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    Re: Hell in a human heart.

    Half of it based on a username called HiesLove. Yup.

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    Re: Hell in a human heart.

    Look I Don't Need You To Go Around Trying To Humilate Me Because I Dumped You! Just Because Girls Used You And I Was Your Last Doesnt Mean Put The Blame On Me! You Putting Your Angry On Me Because Kat Dumped No From What You Said, Used You! JUST LIKE OTHER GIRLS YOU SAID USED YOU!!!! Leave Me Alone Psycho!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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    Re: Hell in a human heart.

    Please keep disagreements via pm or journals.
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    Re: Hell in a human heart.

    Wow................ummmmm that was really good, but extremly harsh, why would you make a poem thats meant to hurt someone. I thought my big brother was surpose to be a rolemodel.
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    Re: Hell in a human heart.

    It was harsh and good at the same time....keep up the good work Rushil...

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    Re: Hell in a human heart.

    some poem yea if it was ment to hurt one of the members should this poem be allowed?
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