Thread: help...

Thats a very nice poem,its a bid sad and has a harsh ending with one of two options to chose from.

ahh jamie dont pick the past plz stay with the new and good plz i beg u im truly tryin too and we will hopefuly find better in the new kk ^^

and this is quite a good poem plz have more

thanks you guys and to tell you the truth i wrote it this morning... And yes equinn i am staying with the future but...

thanks for the comments^^

i really liked your poem^^i truly felt as though i have a connection with it. i would love to read more good job!=]

It's such a sad poem :/ but it's hard to understand what u are going through... *sighs*
^^ i'll be by urside and support u all the time.. ^^ good poem again... i hope u will write more

I know just how it feels for him... I can imagine my ex saying that to me... wait no, he would never say that! He'd keep me with all his strength, lock me in an iron cage and make me sing and bleed for him!!! (quoting my own poem >.< lol) to say: "Let me go..." is to prove you truly love the one you say that to...

"so do i choose the past
the one i've always known to be haunted
or do i choose the future
the one i've come to never live without"
^ This stranza seems just so interesting to me... it's a bit ticky it seems, "the one I've come to never live without"- makes you think if you mean that you can't live without this future or you couldn't create such a future... nice... ^^

Anyways very nice poem and made me think too... nice work Jamie ^^ I hope everything works out...