Thread: Help me

Thats a really really great poem.I love it.Very great job with the wording and emotion.Such a strong meaning and such wonderful symbolisum.Great!!!!!!!!!!!

It is really good itfor me reminds of things that happened before i like it alot good job :

Originally Posted by Little negi sensei

Thats a really really great poem.I love it.Very great job with the wording and emotion.Such a strong meaning and such wonderful symbolisum.Great!!!!!!!!!!!

Really! Than thank you!!!!!!!!!! Thank you so much!

Originally Posted by runebearer00

It is really good itfor me reminds of things that happened before i like it alot good job :

And you as well!!!!!!!!!!!! So thank you!!!!!!

cool! this is the best poem of yours i've read so far.^^ such strong emotion and real sad. hope to see more like this!^^

Originally Posted by KuwiRules145

My memories always hurt
My heart continues to burn

The tear of pain
A past to learn

Forget I whispered
Forget the past

A life to waste
A life never to last

A pain to suffer
The words of goodbye

Thanks for the memories
Even it was a lie

Thanks for the memories
Even if it weren't so great

Thanks for the memories
Even if saying sorry was too late

Forget Forget Forget
I continued to scream

Remember Remember Remember
Says my loud dream

Help me help me please
Yelled my hurt heart

Someone hold me tight
So I won't fall apart

Someone tell me you love me
So I have a reason to live

Someone give me gifts
So I have something to give

Someone please trust me
So I'll feel the same

Someone stay with me
So I won't be alone and lame

Someone love me back
So my heart won't bend

Someone kiss me goodbye
Since this is the end

wow!!!!!!!! really good peommmmmm!!!1 i love it.

Originally Posted by AngelFlow

cool! this is the best poem of yours i've read so far.^^ such strong emotion and real sad. hope to see more like this!^^

Really!!!!! than YAH!!!!! and thank you so much!!!!

Originally Posted by thanhthanh09

wow!!!!!!!! really good peommmmmm!!!1 i love it.

And you as well!!!!!!!!!! Thank you so much really!!!!!!! Thank you!