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    Help me

    My memories always hurt
    My heart continues to burn

    The tear of pain
    A past to learn

    Forget I whispered
    Forget the past

    A life to waste
    A life never to last

    A pain to suffer
    The words of goodbye

    Thanks for the memories
    Even it was a lie

    Thanks for the memories
    Even if it weren't so great

    Thanks for the memories
    Even if saying sorry was too late

    Forget Forget Forget
    I continued to scream

    Remember Remember Remember
    Says my loud dream

    Help me help me please
    Yelled my hurt heart

    Someone hold me tight
    So I won't fall apart

    Someone tell me you love me
    So I have a reason to live

    Someone give me gifts
    So I have something to give

    Someone please trust me
    So I'll feel the same

    Someone stay with me
    So I won't be alone and lame

    Someone love me back
    So my heart won't bend

    Someone kiss me goodbye
    Since this is the end

    「When I'm sad, I stop being sad and be awesome instead」

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    Banned Pyramid Gold Champion, Triathlon Champion, Panik: Pogomania Champion Little negi sensei is off to a good start
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    Re: Help me

    Thats a really really great poem.I love it.Very great job with the wording and emotion.Such a strong meaning and such wonderful symbolisum.Great!!!!!!!!!!!

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    Re: Help me

    It is really good itfor me reminds of things that happened before i like it alot good job :

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    Re: Help me

    Quote Originally Posted by Little negi sensei View Post
    Thats a really really great poem.I love it.Very great job with the wording and emotion.Such a strong meaning and such wonderful symbolisum.Great!!!!!!!!!!!
    Really! Than thank you!!!!!!!!!! Thank you so much!

    Quote Originally Posted by runebearer00 View Post
    It is really good itfor me reminds of things that happened before i like it alot good job :
    And you as well!!!!!!!!!!!! So thank you!!!!!!
    「When I'm sad, I stop being sad and be awesome instead」

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    cool! this is the best poem of yours i've read so far.^^ such strong emotion and real sad. hope to see more like this!^^

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    Re: Help me

    Quote Originally Posted by KuwiRules145 View Post
    My memories always hurt
    My heart continues to burn

    The tear of pain
    A past to learn

    Forget I whispered
    Forget the past

    A life to waste
    A life never to last

    A pain to suffer
    The words of goodbye

    Thanks for the memories
    Even it was a lie

    Thanks for the memories
    Even if it weren't so great

    Thanks for the memories
    Even if saying sorry was too late

    Forget Forget Forget
    I continued to scream

    Remember Remember Remember
    Says my loud dream

    Help me help me please
    Yelled my hurt heart

    Someone hold me tight
    So I won't fall apart

    Someone tell me you love me
    So I have a reason to live

    Someone give me gifts
    So I have something to give

    Someone please trust me
    So I'll feel the same

    Someone stay with me
    So I won't be alone and lame

    Someone love me back
    So my heart won't bend

    Someone kiss me goodbye
    Since this is the end

    wow!!!!!!!! really good peommmmmm!!!1 i love it.

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    Re: Help me

    Quote Originally Posted by AngelFlow View Post
    cool! this is the best poem of yours i've read so far.^^ such strong emotion and real sad. hope to see more like this!^^
    Really!!!!! than YAH!!!!! and thank you so much!!!!

    Quote Originally Posted by thanhthanh09 View Post
    wow!!!!!!!! really good peommmmmm!!!1 i love it.
    And you as well!!!!!!!!!! Thank you so much really!!!!!!! Thank you!
    「When I'm sad, I stop being sad and be awesome instead」

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