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    Help me understand.

    Someone help me out,
    please. Help me understand.
    I've got questions, need
    answers--do you have a sec, man?

    The other day, Momz told me,
    "You've become a good dad."
    But I don't know if that's true,
    so it kinda makse me sad.

    Am I really a good person?
    Does my son think so?
    Those questions get repeated,
    because I really don't know...

    I wear the shirt which
    says I'm the #1 dad, and
    I'm sure it's a shirt that
    my father never had.

    I want to be the opposite
    of what my father was to me.
    Because my dad wasn't around
    until I was about twenty three.

    I love my son more than
    I love life itself.
    For him, I would kick open
    the very gates of hell.

    I would do anything to
    keep him safe from harm.
    He will be out of danger
    as long as he's in my arms.

    I really need to know.
    I have to understand.
    How do I be loved by him?
    How can I be a good dad?


    **Fact: I met my dad six months before I turned 21. I said 23 in the poem for the sake of rhyming.**


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    Re: Help me understand.

    Oh wow that is a very awsome poem.
    I love it.
    And you ask the question htat any parent would
    want to know,
    wow I loved the rhyme scheme to it.
    It was very catchy.lol
    Hey keep it up

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    Re: Help me understand.

    Quote Originally Posted by P.R. Princes View Post
    Oh wow that is a very awsome poem.
    I love it.
    And you ask the question htat any parent would
    want to know,
    wow I loved the rhyme scheme to it.
    It was very catchy.lol
    Hey keep it up
    Hey, thanks alot! ^_^ It's always a treat to know that someone likes my writing.


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    Re: Help me understand.

    im about to say random things

    because i am realy bord

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    Re: Help me understand.

    hey your welcom. ANytime. And yeah I love poetry so yeah.lol.
    But yeah I would love to hear more of your poems.
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    Oh and cbs81 dont do that agin. You get in trouble for spamming. And plus that is a waste. No onw cares if your board frankly. So no spaming.

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    Re: Help me understand.

    Wow I think you are really good dad*Answer the Q.*
    And that’s nice to ask if you are a good dad
    Because these days the parents
    Did not ask them self if they are good or no?
    I love it...Nice and great poem...^^

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    Re: Help me understand.

    Quote Originally Posted by xxoxx View Post
    Wow I think you are really good dad*Answer the Q.*
    And that’s nice to ask if you are a good dad
    Because these days the parents
    Did not ask them self if they are good or no?
    I love it...Nice and great poem...^^
    Thank you. ^_^
    It's good to hear that others think I'm a good parent, y'know? I've got this self-doubt issue--had it since I was little, so It's kinda hard to answer certain questions for myself. Which is why I write so much.

    And, OOOH!!!! CBS81 GOT BANNED! For shame--that's what happens when you make low quality crap-posts. Especially when it's in a thread involving someone's art. >_<


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    Re: Help me understand.

    It's really wonderful to read all those kind of questions any dad would ask to himself.

    But I think most of the time it's not easy to answer all those questions to yourself.

    So it's awesome to write them down and make a poem with them, it shows allot about a person and I think there are many people who carry the same questions with them.

    I love the poem you wrote thank you

    If men where made to think, women where made to tell them they thought wrong
    (Just kidding guys )

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