Oh wow that is a very awsome poem.
I love it.
And you ask the question htat any parent would
want to know,
wow I loved the rhyme scheme to it.
It was very catchy.lol
Hey keep it up
Someone help me out,
please. Help me understand.
I've got questions, need
answers--do you have a sec, man?
The other day, Momz told me,
"You've become a good dad."
But I don't know if that's true,
so it kinda makse me sad.
Am I really a good person?
Does my son think so?
Those questions get repeated,
because I really don't know...
I wear the shirt which
says I'm the #1 dad, and
I'm sure it's a shirt that
my father never had.
I want to be the opposite
of what my father was to me.
Because my dad wasn't around
until I was about twenty three.
I love my son more than
I love life itself.
For him, I would kick open
the very gates of hell.
I would do anything to
keep him safe from harm.
He will be out of danger
as long as he's in my arms.
I really need to know.
I have to understand.
How do I be loved by him?
How can I be a good dad?
**Fact: I met my dad six months before I turned 21. I said 23 in the poem for the sake of rhyming.**
im about to say random things
because i am realy bord
hey your welcom. ANytime. And yeah I love poetry so yeah.lol.
But yeah I would love to hear more of your poems.
Oh and cbs81 dont do that agin. You get in trouble for spamming. And plus that is a waste. No onw cares if your board frankly. So no spaming.
Wow I think you are really good dad*Answer the Q.*
And that’s nice to ask if you are a good dad
Because these days the parents
Did not ask them self if they are good or no?
I love it...Nice and great poem...^^
It's good to hear that others think I'm a good parent, y'know? I've got this self-doubt issue--had it since I was little, so It's kinda hard to answer certain questions for myself. Which is why I write so much.
And, OOOH!!!! CBS81 GOT BANNED! For shame--that's what happens when you make low quality crap-posts. Especially when it's in a thread involving someone's art. >_<
It's really wonderful to read all those kind of questions any dad would ask to himself.
But I think most of the time it's not easy to answer all those questions to yourself.
So it's awesome to write them down and make a poem with them, it shows allot about a person and I think there are many people who carry the same questions with them.
I love the poem you wrote thank you
If men where made to think, women where made to tell them they thought wrong
(Just kidding guys )