Help Me With Your Love!

You look into opened eyes and see darkness
that seems to go on for ever never sleeping,
always watching ,never ending always craving
that which lives in the light , i scream out your
name and nothing helps me as you see into my
eye's.

You hold me close and feel cold flesh
as i stand there with you trying to
let your love warm my heart, always
cold , always loveless never holding
nothing sacred ,your touch leaves
me numb.

Wake me up from this hell i am in,
everything is a living nightmare, please
wake me with your love ,never giving up on me
as my life seems to drift down that path where
the world screams out for forgiveness and i just laugh.

You look into my eyes and see the darkness
that keeps me from you ,that always seems
to always keep me safe with lies that seem
to be more comforting than the truth , please save
me from that which brings sorrow.

How can you see into my eye's and still
say you love me and still stand by me
what makes me so special that you would
stay no matter what? my eyes start to change
as i stand there with you still but it will take more
i know.

this poem is about those who never give up
on love no matter how much the one they love
tried to push them away, and no it isn't that silly
crap like leave me alone i mean true love when both truly
love each other and they never give up on the other no matter
how bad things seem emotionaly because there is so much love.

Very nice, I enjoyed this poem. I loved the first stanza best, especially this part:

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never sleeping,
always watching ,never ending always craving

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All in all, it was cool the way you wrote it and it is very true. When someone cares for you they love everything about you, not just the things on the surface.

Your spelling has been helly improving! The poem kinda reminded me of myself and how I think when a girl says they like me. This line did it for me,"How can you see into my eye's and still say you love me and still stand by me
what makes me so special that you would stay no matter what?"

AWESOME!!!! That was truly amazing big bro!!! :) I could soooo relate 2 this cause i've been through that....but mine didn't end so well lol.Loved the emotion's and the way that you wrote it.Your words speak such truth. :) Awesome job as always big bro!!! :)

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Wake me up from this hell i am in,
everything is a living nightmare, please
wake me with your love ,never giving up on me
as my life seems to drift down that path where
the world screams out for forgiveness and i just laugh.

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I like this part it was funny an dwell fitted for the wording, i like it keep it up

That was such a sweet poem. Everyone should have someone to love them unconditionally like that. I look forward to reading more.