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    Help Me With Your Love!

    You look into opened eyes and see darkness
    that seems to go on for ever never sleeping,
    always watching ,never ending always craving
    that which lives in the light , i scream out your
    name and nothing helps me as you see into my
    eye's.

    You hold me close and feel cold flesh
    as i stand there with you trying to
    let your love warm my heart, always
    cold , always loveless never holding
    nothing sacred ,your touch leaves
    me numb.

    Wake me up from this hell i am in,
    everything is a living nightmare, please
    wake me with your love ,never giving up on me
    as my life seems to drift down that path where
    the world screams out for forgiveness and i just laugh.

    You look into my eyes and see the darkness
    that keeps me from you ,that always seems
    to always keep me safe with lies that seem
    to be more comforting than the truth , please save
    me from that which brings sorrow.

    How can you see into my eye's and still
    say you love me and still stand by me
    what makes me so special that you would
    stay no matter what? my eyes start to change
    as i stand there with you still but it will take more
    i know.

    this poem is about those who never give up
    on love no matter how much the one they love
    tried to push them away, and no it isn't that silly
    crap like leave me alone i mean true love when both truly
    love each other and they never give up on the other no matter
    how bad things seem emotionaly because there is so much love.
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and all your demons
    I'll be the one to protect you from a will to survive and a voice of reason
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and your choices son
    They're one in the same, I must isolate you...
    Isolate and save you from yourself

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    Re: Help Me With Your Love!

    Very nice, I enjoyed this poem. I loved the first stanza best, especially this part:

    never sleeping,
    always watching ,never ending always craving
    All in all, it was cool the way you wrote it and it is very true. When someone cares for you they love everything about you, not just the things on the surface.
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    Re: Help Me With Your Love!

    Your spelling has been helly improving! The poem kinda reminded me of myself and how I think when a girl says they like me. This line did it for me,"How can you see into my eye's and still say you love me and still stand by me
    what makes me so special that you would stay no matter what?"
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    Re: Help Me With Your Love!

    AWESOME!!!! That was truly amazing big bro!!! I could soooo relate 2 this cause i've been through that....but mine didn't end so well lol.Loved the emotion's and the way that you wrote it.Your words speak such truth. Awesome job as always big bro!!!
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    Re: Help Me With Your Love!

    Wake me up from this hell i am in,
    everything is a living nightmare, please
    wake me with your love ,never giving up on me
    as my life seems to drift down that path where
    the world screams out for forgiveness and i just laugh.
    I like this part it was funny an dwell fitted for the wording, i like it keep it up


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    Re: Help Me With Your Love!

    That was such a sweet poem. Everyone should have someone to love them unconditionally like that. I look forward to reading more.
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