For Her!

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Everything is silent as he walks
up to the door , she walks up to
him with a smile and Say's she has
missed him all day , as the day goes
on a brand new trouble rises she Tell's
him she has regrets and she wants to
make things right.

As he sits not sound does he make
after a few minutes of deadly quiet
she speaks up again , please you must
understand i must make things right
because if you want me 100% then
i must go to him.

Another minutes passes as a tear comes
to his eye , he looks to her with a smile
and say , do what you think is best , she walks
away with heavy heart but she must do what
she thinks is right as the evening comes the anger
grows and lord knows it ain't right.

All his life he has held back his pain
and even swallowed his pride becuase
she means the world to him and he just
wants her love . the moon rises as the
phone is picked up , she said i have to see
you its something i have to do.

In the a room near by that smile starts
to fade , he keeps telling himself she will
be his some day soon , she walks by him
with perfume on as a heart begins so crack.

He just goes to bed with a heavy sigh
as she stays out the hole night , 6 : 30
in the morning she comes in to there room
he hair is brushed back light with a new scent
from a stranger.

He hears a voice in the other room
as she says be quiet , all these years
of giving in to what they want ,is now
a raging storm he gets up from where
he lays and walks up to her with a smile.

He says i think its time for you to understand
the me because all i have ever done try to
be the best i could and you throw it in my face,
she stands there as the storm grows bigger
by the minute all she can say is that it was what
she needed to do to be with him.

His smile went away as the lightning flashed
and the storm got worse and she knew she
passed that final line as he walked towards
that gun he had in the corner cabinet , and
his eyes are dead to the world , she screams
please dont as foot steps come from another room.

The man walks in and hold her tight and
says whats going on , a fire rings and the
man falls dead and he hold that trigger light,
he says , baby we are through i have had enough
of this if i cant have you no one can so you will
get whats coming to you .

She closes here eyes as she prays to god
hoping this is just a nightmare , a shot rings out
she jerks a bit and she hears him the floor she looks
to him now as the blood flows from those lips he loved
her with , she picked the gun up with a tear and said
you want beat me so easily , she pulls the trigger now
she is dead , but this world just keeps going on.
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this poem/story is about how one man loved a girl
so much that he did what it took to make her happy
it sounds stupid for some guy to say *ok if being with
this other man makes you want me even more then
you can do that* there have been many guys who
have said this at one time or another and it stupid.

in the end everyone will be hurt even if it isbt
like this poem/story , and im sorry its so long but
i couldnt find the ending i wanted when i got near
it , i felt like i had to keep going.

any comments or sugestions are welcomed

well it certainly is long but it's still great though loved it, even if it was a love story but so what your great post more poems or stories which ever

thanks im glad you liked it and i tried stoping
as sevral difrent point but the story/poem just
wanted to keep going and i could stop lol , i
still have problems with comeing up with a good
ending when that happens.

well to be honest i'm kinda glad you didn't stop as it might not have been as good then and the ending was great i too find it hard ending stuff like stories and poems depending on what it's about that is

This was a very good story. It had romance,suspense,and murder all rolled into one. It's so unbelieveable of how two people can love eachother so much they go to extreme lenghts to be together. Great job.

What a nice poem story ...i love it ...
very nice...and it's not that talll and not short ..but very goood work ...
how do you discrayab your idea ...nice way to writed like a story ....hope to see more...:2thumbs:

I liked it quite well... it was interesting to read it.

A great story you've told here, though I just don't understand how something like this could happen in life- first time I hear somewhere that a girl says to her man that she needs to be with someone else to love him more... that sounds like total bulsh*t to me... lol But I guess things like this happen in life so thank you for bringing my attention to it ^^

Indeed a nice work again Chris ^^

by that i mwan she regrets not having been
with some other guy and she feels she cant really
love the man she is with untill she has been with the other
guy , what makes this a fictional story is that he let her
and didnt leave , anyother guy would have left.